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Write a letter to gym manager to recover your bag which you forget at gym yesterday. You came to know that gym will be closed for 1 week due to some renovation. 1) Introduce yourself2) Explain what things you have inside it. 3) Why you need it so urgent v.2

Write a letter to gym manager to recover your bag which you forget at gym yesterday. You came to know that gym will be closed for 1 week due to some renovation. 1) Introduce yourself2) Explain what things you have inside it. 3) Why you need it so urgent v. 2
To, The manager, Fitness gym Sub -Requisition for leftover personal bag Dear John, my name is calis & i am one of your tenants coming for regular gyming at your center. you can check id - 4578 which will provide complete information about me. I would like to request for recovery of my bag which i forget at counter yesterday. it' s red color leather handbag which has white strips at both surface periphery. it has also metallic ring having letter DG embarked on it. I came to know gym is closed for another one week which will be problematic for me. it has some important documents without which it be difficulty for me to manage. it is having collage id card, driving license & few agreement papers of my new hired flat which need to be presented to land owner tomorrow. I request you to kindly keep this bag at security office at entrance wherein i will collect by showing my Identification proof. Looking for your kind consideration & support. Yours Faithfully, calis id No. - 4578
To,

The manager,

Fitness gym

Sub -Requisition for leftover personal bag

Dear John,

my name is
calis
&amp
;
i
am one of your tenants coming for regular
gyming
at your center.
you
can
check
id
-
4578 which will provide complete information about me.

I would like to request for recovery of my bag which
i
forget at counter yesterday.
it&
#039; s red color leather handbag which has white strips at both surface periphery.
it
has
also
metallic ring having letter DG embarked on it. I came to know gym
is closed
for another one week which will be problematic for me. it has
some
important
documents without which it
be
difficulty for me to manage.
it
is having collage id card, driving license
&amp
; few agreement papers of my new hired flat which need to
be presented
to land owner tomorrow.

I request you to kindly
keep
this bag at security office at entrance wherein
i
will collect by showing my Identification proof. Looking for your kind consideration
&amp
; support.

Yours
Faithfully
,

calis


id
No.
-
4578
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to gym manager to recover your bag which you forget at gym yesterday. You came to know that gym will be closed for 1 week due to some renovation. 1) Introduce yourself2) Explain what things you have inside it. 3) Why you need it so urgent v. 2

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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