Dear Sir,
I’m writing this letter to inquire about the upcoming seminar that our organization is planning to arrange.
I have been with this organization for 3 years however now I am working in the transcription department. My career path is managerial, I always take a lead in training our team, arranging workshops, developing/training new hires. My manager suggested me to take part in this seminar. We believe this will give exposure to me and I will be to gain some new skills by the end which then I will be able to share and use on our new hires that I train.
I will like to gain some information on this seminar, itinerary and If you can share the planned daily program, most importantly if I can get to know about the overall cost and accommodation process as it will not be sponsored by our department. I will have to make arrangements for myself. I will be thankful to you if you can give me these details so I can make arrangements.
Your Sincerely,
Malik
Dear Sir,
I’m writing this letter to inquire about the upcoming seminar that our organization is planning to arrange.
I have been with this organization for 3 years
however
now
I am working in the transcription department. My career path is managerial, I always take a lead in training our team, arranging workshops, developing/training new hires. My manager suggested me to
take part
in this seminar. We believe this will give exposure to me and I will be to gain
some
new
skills
by the
end
which then I will be able to share and
use
on our new hires that I train.
I
will
like to gain
some
information on this seminar, itinerary and If you can share the planned daily program, most
importantly
if I can
get
to know about the
overall
cost and accommodation process as it will not
be sponsored
by our department. I will
have to
make
arrangements for myself.
I
will be thankful to you if you can give me these
details
so
I can
make
arrangements.
Your
Sincerely
,
Malik
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