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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. Write at least v.52

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. Write at least v. 52
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to give you my feedback/review of a decent fine dining restaurant called “The Lodhi – Garden Restaurant” which is located near Lodhi Gardens, New Delhi. We recently had a chance to visit this multi-cuisine restaurant with my family. It was my husband’s birthday. It is a garden themed restaurant with incredible ambience and delicious food. Because of the lush green surroundings, it gives a very refreshing break from the concrete city. Their staff is also very cordial and courteous. Everything they served was from seasonal and organic produce. We ordered Mezze platter, Pasta, Bruschetta with Cold coffee. Though it was bit pricey but considering the ambience and experience we had, the price was completely worth it. It cost us around 4000 for 2 adults and 2 kids. I would recommend this restaurant, especially for special occasions or romantic dinner parties. I would give 4. 5 out of 5 stars to this restaurant. I hope my feedback would be helpful for your newspaper readers who are looking out for some good restaurants with great ambience. Yours’ Sincerely
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to give you my feedback/review of a decent fine dining
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restaurant
called “The
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Lodhi
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–
Garden
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Restaurant”
which
is located
near
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Lodhi
Gardens, New Delhi. We recently had a chance to visit this multi-cuisine
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restaurant
with my family. It was my husband’s birthday.

It is a garden themed
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restaurant
with incredible ambience and delicious food.
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Because
of the lush green surroundings, it gives a
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very
refreshing break from the concrete city. Their staff is
also
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very
cordial and courteous. Everything they served was from seasonal and organic produce. We ordered
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Mezze
platter, Pasta,
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Bruschetta
with
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Cold
coffee. Though it was
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bit
pricey
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but
considering the ambience and experience we had, the price was completely worth it. It cost us around 4000 for 2 adults and 2 kids.

I would recommend this
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restaurant
,
especially
for special occasions or romantic dinner parties. I would give 4. 5 out of 5 stars to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. I hope my feedback would be helpful for your newspaper readers who are looking out for
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
with great ambience.

An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "Yours"?
Yours’
Sincerely
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. Write at least v. 52

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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