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You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v.2

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident in the Teraleus community and a photojournalist by profession. I am writing a recommendation to other citizens, which I believe you would publish in your newspaper, for one of our fine neighbourhood dining establishments - The Diners' Heart. I had been to this establishment twice last month, and I absolutely love their food, professionalism, decor and behaviours. The décor, free parking, and friendly staffs are something a guest would notice even before he tastes the food. I particularly enjoyed their variety of dishes including exotic ones. But, it was the service, along with the size and quality of the portions, that was most memorable. I must mention that they offer a great price. The service was professional yet intimate, and along with the sheer quantity of the dishes served, their great price motivated me to pass on my recommendation. I enjoyed their fried rice, and a giant fresh, crisp salad accompanied by a selection of appropriately selected seasonal vegetables and a fish curry. I finally enjoyed their fabulous dessert item - and all for a reasonable price. I hope you would help others know about this establishment so that they can enjoy the delicious food and have family parties at a great place. Yours faithfully, Wilson Miller
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident in the
Teraleus
community and a photojournalist by profession. I am writing a recommendation to other citizens, which I believe you would publish in your newspaper, for one of our fine
neighbourhood
dining establishments
-
The Diners' Heart.

I
had been to this establishment twice last month, and I
absolutely
love
their food, professionalism, decor and
behaviours
. The
décor
, free parking, and friendly staffs are something a guest would notice even
before
he tastes the food. I
particularly
enjoyed their variety of dishes including exotic ones.
But
, it was the service, along with the size and quality of the portions, that was most memorable. I
must
mention that they offer a great price.

The service was professional
yet
intimate, and along with the sheer quantity of the dishes served, their great price motivated me to pass on my recommendation. I enjoyed their fried rice, and a giant fresh, crisp salad accompanied by a selection of
appropriately
selected seasonal vegetables and a fish curry. I
finally
enjoyed their fabulous dessert item
-
and all for a reasonable price.

I
hope you would
help
others know about this establishment
so
that they can enjoy the delicious food and have family parties at a great place.

Yours
faithfully
,

Wilson Miller
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS letter You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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