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You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. -Say what the part v.3

You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. -Say what the part v. 3
Dear Sir or Madam, Our conference was held in your hotel on 25th September. I writing to inform you about some experiences our participants had in the hotel. Our guests are totally interested your conference hall and facilities such as free Wi-Fi, the free package includes papers and pens. Moreover, they liked the reception and parking spaces which was your staff polite and warm welcoming to guests. Unfortunately, many participate were unhappy about food because your colleagues served foods too late and the foods were so cold. It’s happened really dangerous for our conference and we receive many complaints about foods. In addition, some people complained about rice which was too salty for someone’s who had some disease and must to have a specific diet. In my view, should your staff serve foods at a specific time, foods are still warm. I suppose to cook rice with little salt, in that not only someone’s does not like salty food, but also some people especially elderly ones have the disease and its harmful for them. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jack Brown
Dear Sir or Madam,

Our conference
was held
in your hotel on 25th September.
I writing
to inform you about
some
experiences our participants had in the hotel.

Our guests are
totally
interested your conference hall and facilities such as free Wi-Fi, the free package includes papers and pens.
Moreover
, they liked the reception and parking spaces which was your staff polite and warm welcoming to guests.

Unfortunately,
many
participate were unhappy about
food
because
your colleagues served
foods
too late and the
foods
were
so
cold
. It’s happened
really
dangerous
for our
conference and
we receive
many
complaints about
foods
.
In addition
,
some
people
complained about rice which was too salty for someone’s who had
some
disease and
must to
have a specific diet.

In my view, should your staff serve
foods
at a specific time,
foods
are
still
warm. I suppose to cook rice with
little
salt, in that not
only
someone’s does not like salty
food
,
but
also
some
people
especially
elderly ones have the disease and its harmful for them.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jack Brown
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. -Say what the part v. 3

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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