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The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pro v.2

The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pro v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regards with the rubbish collection system used in our local area. We are located in west side of the city where there are many families residing. i would like tell the council, the problems that are being faced by the local people because of the collection system not working properly. The staff appointed for the collection of rubbish are not executing their works efficiently and effectively. They are not clearing all the rubbish available near the garbage drums due to which the air is getting polluted, unhygienic and the smell is coming to each house located near to it. Requesting the council to take necessary action the staff appointed for the rubbish collection system and it would be helpful if the garbage area properly sprayed as Mosquitos are becoming more in the area. Hoping the council takes immediate measures to make sure the well-being of the residents. yours sincerely Syed
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in regards with the
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rubbish
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collection
system
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used
in our local area. We
are located
in west side of the city where there are
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many
families residing.
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i
would like
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tell
the council, the problems that are
being faced
by the local
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people
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because
of the
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collection
system not working
properly
.

The staff appointed for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
collection
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
are not executing their works
efficiently
and
effectively
. They are not clearing all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
available near the garbage drums due to which the air is getting polluted, unhygienic and the smell is coming to each
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
located near to it.

Requesting the council to take necessary action the staff appointed for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
collection
system and it would be helpful if the garbage area
properly
sprayed as
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Mosquitos
are becoming more in the area.

Hoping the council takes immediate measures to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure the well-being of the residents.

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yours
sincerely


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Syed
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS letter The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pro v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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