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You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v.1

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to share my positive review for the Yummy Restaurant that I believe is a worth visiting dining establishment in our area. We celebrated my sister's birthday party last week at this restaurant. Originally, I thought only twenty people would attend, but apparently, the number increased to thirty. I was worried that it would not be possible for the restaurant to accommodate more people without prior notice. However, I was pleasantly surprised when the Manager told me that they could do it and would even upgrade our room to a more spacious one. The overall service was impeccable and the party was a hit, thanks to the great staff and their professionalism. We ordered a three-course set menu and the taste was top-notch. The escargot entree was absolutely divine that I could still remember the taste of its garlic butter sauce. My sister ordered pan-fried salmon fillet with mashed potatoes as the main course, and people were raving about it. The dessert was a mini-opera which I thought to be rather average, though it might simply because I do not have sweet teeth. Overall, we experienced a wonderful night at this restaurant. This place is highly recommended and we have even started planning our next visit. I believe you should publish an article regarding this establishment in your 'Fine diners' section so that people can learn about this fabulous place. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Helen Lim
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to share my
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positive
review for the Yummy
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Restaurant
that I believe is a worth visiting dining establishment in our area.

We celebrated my sister's birthday party last week at this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
.
Originally
, I
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thought
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only
twenty
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people
would attend,
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but
apparently
, the number increased to thirty. I
was worried
that it would not be possible for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
to accommodate more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
without prior notice.
However
, I was
pleasantly
surprised when the Manager
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that they could do it and would even upgrade our room to a more spacious one. The
overall
service was impeccable and the party was a hit, thanks to the great staff and their professionalism.

We ordered a three-course set menu and the taste was top-notch. The escargot
'entree' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "entrée"
entree
was
absolutely
divine that I could
still
remember the taste of its garlic butter sauce. My sister ordered pan-fried salmon fillet with mashed potatoes as the main course, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
were raving about it. The dessert was a mini-opera which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
to be
rather
average, though it might
simply
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I do not have sweet teeth.

Overall
, we experienced a wonderful night at this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. This place is
highly
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recommended and
we have even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
planning our
next
visit. I believe you should publish an article regarding this establishment in your 'Fine diners' section
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so
that
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people
can learn about this fabulous place.

Thank you in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Helen
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IELTS letter You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
243 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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