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You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v.4

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 4
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to a local restaurant that provides wonderful services to its customers and I request you to publish a review of this restaurant in the ‘Food and Life’ section of your famous daily to let people know about it. Recently, I took my family to dine out at a local restaurant named Golden Spoon at Lalmatia, Mohammadpur. The restaurant mainly serves Chinese and Thai food, although they have arrangements for continental dishes. It is a two-storied building with a rooftop and has ample space for car parking in front of the restaurant. The restaurant is decorated with paintings and soft lightings, and wonderful wooden furniture. We were stunned by the music being played at a low volume to add pleasure to the guests. It has a playground for children on the first floor. We were also delighted at their warm reception and reasonable price. During our last visit, I ordered Thai soup, chicken fry, rice with beef and prawn, and vegetable salad. The food was so fresh and delicious that we ate more than usual. The waiters gave us a great service and we were offered a 10% complimentary discount. I believe this restaurant is worth visiting for the food lovers who like to taste different dishes and want the best return on their money. I am hoping you would write a review on this establishment so that more people can know about it. Yours faithfully, Enamul Kabir
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to draw your attention to a local
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restaurant
that provides wonderful services to its customers and I request you to publish a review of this
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restaurant
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
‘Food
and Life’ section of your
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famous
daily to
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let
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
know about it.

Recently, I took my family to dine out at a local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
named Golden Spoon at
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Lalmatia
, Mohammadpur. The
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restaurant
mainly
serves Chinese and Thai
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food
, although they have arrangements for continental dishes. It is a two-storied building with a rooftop and has ample space for car parking in front of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. The
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restaurant
is decorated
with paintings and soft
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lightings
, and wonderful wooden furniture. We
were stunned
by the music
being played
at a low volume to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
pleasure to the guests. It has a playground for children on the
first
floor. We were
also
delighted at their warm reception and reasonable price.

During our last visit, I ordered Thai soup, chicken fry, rice with beef and prawn, and vegetable salad. The
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food
was
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so
fresh and delicious that we ate more than usual. The waiters gave us a great
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
service and
we
were offered
a 10% complimentary discount.

I believe this
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restaurant
is worth visiting for the
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food
lovers who like to taste
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different
dishes and want the best return on their money. I am hoping you would write a review on this establishment
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so
that more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can know about it.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Enamul
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Kabir
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 4

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
247 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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