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You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v.3

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 3
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Panadura city in Kaluthara district and writing to express my enthusiasm regarding a restaurant that I visited with my family last week. I believe this is a magnificent place for diners and would like you to publish a review on it so that others in our community can learn about it I have visited the establishment - The River View, with my family to enjoy dinner last Sunday. The surrounding view is wonderful and it was decorated gorgeously. The decoration and ambience of the place were mesmerising, not to mention the well-behaved staff. We ordered fried rice, chicken curry, Parata and Lunumiris and I personally felt that they had a wide range of dishes we could choose from. We were served very quickly and the food tasted celestial.   Normally, I don't each much at night, but on that day I had a heavy meal! They offered us a 15% discount and a complimentary dessert. All of my family members appreciated the dining experience and mentioned the scrumptious menu they enjoyed. They thanked me for taking them to a great eatery. This letter is to inform about this restaurant to the mass people because it is a worth visiting place. Yours faithfully, Ashesha Weerasinghe
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of
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Panadura
city in
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Kaluthara
district and writing to express my enthusiasm regarding a restaurant that I visited with my family last week. I believe this is a magnificent place for diners and would like you to publish a review on it
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so
that others in our community can learn about
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it


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I
have visited the establishment
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The River View, with my family to enjoy dinner last Sunday. The surrounding view is wonderful and it
was decorated
gorgeously
. The decoration and ambience of the place were
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mesmerising
, not to mention the well-behaved staff. We ordered fried rice, chicken curry,
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Parata
and
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Lunumiris
and I
personally
felt that they had a wide range of dishes we could choose from. We
were served
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very
quickly
and the food tasted celestial.
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Normally
, I don't each much at night,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
on that day I had a heavy meal! They offered us a 15% discount and a complimentary dessert.

All of my family members appreciated the dining experience and mentioned the scrumptious menu they enjoyed. They thanked me for taking them to a great eatery.

This letter is to inform about this restaurant to the mass
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is a worth visiting place.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ashesha
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Weerasinghe
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0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS letter You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 3

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
212 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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