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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: •thank them for the photos and f v.46

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: •thank them for the photos and f v. 46
Dear Sam and Sara, Hi. How’ve you been doing? I hope this letter finds you well. To start, thanks for your great hospitality while I was at your place and making the best holiday I ever had. Also, I was more than delighted to receive the photos of our time together. I’m sorry not to write to you sooner. As soon as I got home, my mother became sick, and I’ve been taking care of her. She’s recovering, though, and there’s no need to be worried. I was wondering if you would come to Mashhad at the end of this month. Firstly, it’s going to be some days off owing to some national holidays coming up. Also, this time of the year, the weather in Mashhad is just perfect, letting people laze around and soak in the fresh atmosphere. Besides, not only will we be having a great time together, but it gives me the chance to return your favor and host you for some days. I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Aidin
Dear Sam and Sara,

Hi. How’ve you
Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "was", "were"?
been
doing? I hope this letter finds you well.

To
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start
, thanks for your great hospitality while I was at your place and making the best holiday I ever had.
Also
, I was more than delighted to receive the photos of our time together.

I’m sorry not to write to you sooner. As
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
home, my mother became sick, and I’ve been taking care of her. She’s recovering, though, and there’s no need to
be worried
.

I was wondering if you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to Mashhad at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this month.
Firstly
, it’s going to be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
days off owing to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
national holidays coming up.
Also
, this time of the year, the weather in Mashhad is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
perfect, letting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
laze around and soak in the fresh atmosphere.
Besides
, not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
will we be having a great time together,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it gives me the chance to return your favor and host you for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
days.

I look forward to seeing you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours,

Aidin
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: •thank them for the photos and f v. 46

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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