26. 09. 2017 Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter. Thank them for the photos and for the holidayExplain why you didn’t wr v.2
26. 09. 2017 Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter. Thank them for the photos and for the holidayExplain why you didn’t wr v. 2
Dear John and Sarah,
I am writing to thank you for young hospitality and help.
To begin with, I want to thank you for showing me your city, your knowledge of landmarks and interesting places has made the holiday so remarkable and joyful. Moreover, I have just downloaded all the photos you sent to me; the quality of the picture is marvelous, you both have an incredible talent in taking photos and Sarah' s novel camera makes everything looks better.
Also, I deeply apologize for not writing you earlier. The main reason for the delay is that my luggage was mistakenly sent to Moscow instead of Los Angeles. So, I had been waiting for my baggage for almost twenty-four hours till my bags arrived in LA. Moreover, when I arrived at the home, I learned that my landlord had forgotten to pay bills for electricity; thus, I lived for a while without this essential convenience.
Finally, I invite you to visit me this summer. By the time you arrive, I will have prepared a nice and thoughtful plan how to entertain you. Of course, you needn’t rent a flat of a hotel room because I rent a spacious apartment and you in my place as long as you wish.
I am waiting for your prompt response
Sincerely yours,
Eugen Dubinchuk
Dear John and Sarah,
I am writing to thank you for young hospitality and
help
.
To
begin
with, I want to thank you for showing me your city, your knowledge of landmarks and interesting places has made the holiday
so
remarkable and joyful.
Moreover
, I have
just
downloaded all the photos you
sent
to me; the quality of the picture is marvelous, you both have an incredible talent in taking photos and
Sarah&
#039; s novel camera
makes
everything looks better.
Also
, I
deeply
apologize for not writing you earlier. The main reason for the delay is that my luggage was
mistakenly
sent
to Moscow
instead
of Los Angeles.
So
, I had been waiting for my baggage for almost twenty-four hours till my bags arrived in LA.
Moreover
, when I arrived at the home, I learned that my landlord had forgotten to pay bills for electricity;
thus
, I
lived
for a while without this essential convenience.
Finally
, I invite you to visit me this summer. By the time you arrive, I will have prepared a nice and thoughtful plan how to entertain you.
Of course
, you needn’t rent a flat of a hotel room
because
I rent a spacious apartment and you in my place as long as you wish.
I am waiting for your prompt response
Sincerely
yours,
Eugen
Dubinchuk
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0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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