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General Writing Task - 1Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your Letter -> Thank them for the photos and for the holiday-> Explain v.2

General Writing Task - 1Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your Letter -> Thank them for the photos and for the holiday-> Explain v. 2
Dear Jimmy, How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. I' m writing just to say thank you to your guys. Thank you for sending photos of us enjoying vacation in Australia to me. These photos are a reminder of pleasant memory. I am grateful for your effort in taking these pictures and sending back to me. Besides, I appreciate your inviting me to celebrate holiday with you. During my staying with you in Australia, I had a wonderful time. I am sorry that I did not write you earlier. After I arrived in China on 8 October 2016, I was preparing my immigration to Australia. I fall love with Australia, especially the climate of Brisbane and nice people living there. As a reciprecate for your kindness of inviting me, I' d like to invite you to visit China. You can experience the spectecular landscape in China. All the accommodation will be my treat. I am looking forward to your affirmative reply. All the best Jim
Dear Jimmy,

How are you doing? I hope you are doing well.
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#039; m writing
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just
to say thank you to your guys.

Thank you for sending photos of us enjoying vacation in Australia to me. These photos are a reminder of pleasant memory. I am grateful for your effort in taking these pictures and sending back to me.
Besides
, I appreciate your inviting me to celebrate holiday with you. During my staying with you in Australia, I had a wonderful time.

I am sorry that I did not write you earlier. After I arrived in China on 8 October 2016, I was preparing my immigration to Australia. I fall
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
with Australia,
especially
the climate of Brisbane and nice
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
living there.

As a
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reciprecate
for your kindness of inviting me,
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I&
#039; d like to invite you to visit China. You can experience the
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spectecular
landscape in China. All the accommodation will be my treat.

I am looking forward to your affirmative reply.

All the best

Jim
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter General Writing Task - 1Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your Letter -> Thank them for the photos and for the holiday-> Explain v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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