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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care v.35

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care v. 35
Dear Kate, How are you? Thanks for accepting to take care of my home and dog during my vacation. I almost cancelled the holiday when I couldn' t find someone to help out. My holiday is starting on the September 15 and I' m jetting out to New Delhi the same day. I' ll be staying at Hotel Tropicana and in case you need to contact me, please call the hotel' s customer care on 01896754 and tell them to transfer you to Alfred on room 112. You can also reach me through my personal email and for urgent matters, please use my WhatsApp or BBM. Katy, is a difficult dog. She finds it difficult to cling to strangers easily, however, by the time you feed her for two consecutive periods, she will adjust to you. She needs to eat three times a day and her food is inside the fridge in the kitchen. Katy usually eats between Seven and Nine in the morning. The afternoon and evening meals are usually spaced between five and six hours from the previous meal. If you don' t follow this regime, she may refuse to eat the food. You also need to bath her two times a day. I' ve affixed the instructions on how to do this on the dining table. I' d also like that you take of the flowering plants in my parlor too. All you need to do is to water them twice a day and give them some fresh air. What I do is to open the windows during the day, but do not forget to close them at night or the house will be robbed. Girl, I hope you enjoy your time with Katy. Cheers, Alfred.
Dear Kate,

How are you? Thanks for accepting to take care of my home and dog during my vacation. I almost cancelled the holiday when I
couldn&
#039; t find someone to
help
out.

My holiday is starting on the September 15 and
I&
#039; m jetting out to New Delhi the same day.
I&
#039; ll be staying at Hotel Tropicana and in case you
need
to contact me,
please
call the
hotel&
#039; s customer care on 01896754 and
tell
them to transfer you to Alfred on room 112. You can
also
reach me through my personal email and for urgent matters,
please
use
my WhatsApp or BBM.

Katy, is a difficult dog. She finds it difficult to cling to strangers
easily
,
however
, by the
time
you feed her for two consecutive periods, she will adjust to you. She
needs
to eat three
times
a day and her food is inside the fridge in the kitchen. Katy
usually
eats between Seven and
Nine
in the morning. The afternoon and evening meals are
usually
spaced between five and six hours from the previous meal. If you
don&
#039; t follow this regime, she may refuse to eat the food. You
also
need
to bath
her two
times
a day.
I&
#039; ve affixed the instructions on how to do this on the dining table.

I&
#039; d
also
like that you take of the flowering plants in my parlor too. All you
need
to do is to water them twice a day and give them
some
fresh air. What I do is to open the windows during the day,
but
do not forget to close them at night or the
house
will
be robbed
.

Girl, I hope you enjoy your
time
with Katy.

Cheers,

Alfred.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care v. 35

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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