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WRITING TASK 1 – General Writing IELTSYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter•give contact details for when you are aw v.1

WRITING TASK 1 – General Writing IELTS A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter•give contact details for when you are aw v. 1
Dear …………………, I appreciate that you’ve agreed to take care of my home and my cat when I’m away on my vacation. I’m really thankful to you for this gesture. As discussed in our call today, I will be in London for a week and will be staying at Hilton Palace Hotel. You can call me through hotel reception if there is anything that you need to pass on to me during this time. I’ve texted you the hotel’s telephone no. in your Whatsapp. About my cat, please give it food only three times a day. I’ve clearly marked the time and quantity of food that should be fed on the cover of each packet. You can easily locate them on the shelf near main door. One thing that I want to remind you is to water my flowers inside my house. They are to be watered daily in the evening. Finally, please don’t forget to clear my mailbox every day. Once again, thank you so much for your assistance. Best wishes, A
Dear …………………,

I appreciate that you’ve
agreed
to take care of my home and my cat when I’m away on my vacation. I’m
really
thankful to you for this gesture.

As discussed in our call
today
, I will be in London for a week and will be staying at Hilton Palace Hotel. You can call me through hotel reception if there is anything that you need to pass on to me during this time. I’ve texted you the hotel’s telephone no. in your
Whatsapp
.

About my cat,
please
give it food
only
three times a day. I’ve
clearly
marked the time and quantity of food that should
be fed
on the cover of each packet. You can
easily
locate them on the shelf near main door.

One thing that I want to remind you is to water my flowers inside my
house
. They are to
be watered
daily in the evening.

Finally
,
please
don’t forget to
clear
my mailbox every day. Once again, thank you
so
much for your assistance.

Best wishes,

A
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter WRITING TASK 1 – General Writing IELTS A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter•give contact details for when you are aw v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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