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18/10/2017 A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other hous v.2

18/10/2017 A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other hous v. 2
Dear John, To begin with, I want to thank you for your consent to look after my house and dog. Your help is indispensable and without it, I would not be able to have any vacation in a foreseen future. I leave the city on 29th March and return on 15th April. I am going to spend the first week of my holidays on sightseeing Sochi and then I plan to visit beaches of Cremia. My cell-phone will be “on” all the time and you can call me freely at any time. If you are not able to contact me by phone, write an email. The telephone numbers of my hotels, I will send you by SMS as soon as I book rooms. I know you have a plethora of experience with pets but my dog has quite a difficult character. Feeding is the biggest problem if it doesn' t want to eat, just ignore it: when the dog is hungry, it will eat whatever you put on its plate. Mike should be taken on a walk at least twice a day to make pee and poo outside the house. All needed equipment to clean after the dog is placed near the entrance. There are some basic rules concerned living in my house. Firstly, plants ought to be watered thrice a week. Secondly, the lawn should be cut once a week. And finally, my payment to the landlady is planed on 5th April, your duty is to hand her the cash and ask her to count the money in front of you. Otherwise, she may claim you gave her only a half. Once again, thank you for your help. Sincerely yours, Eugene Dubinchuk.
Dear John,

To
begin
with, I want to thank you for your consent to look after my
house
and
dog
. Your
help
is indispensable and without it, I would not be able to have any vacation in a foreseen future. I
leave
the city on 29th March and return on 15th April. I am going to spend the
first
week of my holidays on sightseeing Sochi and then I plan to visit beaches of
Cremia
. My cell-phone will be “on” all the time and you can call me
freely
at any time. If you are not able to contact me by phone, write an email. The telephone numbers of my hotels, I will
send
you by SMS as
soon
as I book rooms.

I know you have a plethora of experience with pets
but
my
dog
has quite a difficult character. Feeding is the biggest problem if it
doesn&
#039; t want to eat,
just
ignore
it: when the
dog
is hungry, it will eat whatever you put on its plate. Mike should
be taken
on a walk at least twice a day to
make
pee and poo outside the
house
. All needed equipment to clean after the
dog
is placed
near the entrance.

There are
some
basic
rules
concerned living in my
house
.
Firstly
, plants ought to
be watered
thrice a week.
Secondly
, the lawn should be
cut
once a week. And
finally
, my payment to the landlady
is planed
on 5th April, your duty is to hand her the cash and ask her to count the money in front of you.
Otherwise
, she may claim you gave her
only
a half.

Once again, thank you for your
help
.

Sincerely
yours,

Eugene
Dubinchuk
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter 18/10/2017 A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other hous v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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