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You should spend 20 minutes on this task. You are unable to complete your course – you have discontinued it. Write a letter to your teacher to thank him and explain –▪why have you discontinued it? ▪what are your reasons for thanking him/her? Write at v.4

You are unable to complete your course – you have discontinued it. Write a letter to your teacher to thank him and explain –▪why have you discontinued it? ▪what are your reasons for thanking him/her? Write at v. 4
Dear Mr. Raoufi. I am writing to inform you, to my sadness, I am not able to continue IELTS classes, and I must quell coming classes due to several matters. First, as you might know I took an IELTS exam last week which I did not get the scores needed although I had been studying english hard for the past 6 months. I simply need some rest so that after a while I try again to achieve my goal. Second, my economic situation is a little poor since not only did I work less in the clinic but I had to pay for the course and exams. But still despite my failure in the IELTS, I am grateful about the service you provided. I believe my knowledge has become well enough during the course and I just need some practice to master the skills to success, which would be impossible if I had not a marvelous teacher like you. Moreover, getting to know a perfect person like you and become friend with is an honor for me. I sincerely hope that we keep in touch outside the institute. Thanks for being the best teacher I have ever had. Yours Truly. A. Farughi
Dear Mr.
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Raoufi
.

I am writing to inform you, to my sadness, I am not able to continue IELTS classes, and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
quell coming classes due to several matters.

First
, as you might know I took an IELTS exam last week which I did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the scores needed although I had been studying
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english
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
for the past 6 months. I
simply
need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
rest
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that after a while I try again to achieve my goal. Second, my economic situation is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
poor since not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
did I work less in the clinic
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I had to pay for the course and exams.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
still
despite my failure in the IELTS, I am grateful about the service you provided. I believe my knowledge has become well
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
during the course and I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
practice to master the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to success, which would be impossible if I had not a marvelous teacher like you.
Moreover
, getting to know a perfect person like you and become friend with is an honor for me. I
sincerely
hope that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
in touch outside the institute.

Thanks for being the best teacher I have ever had.

Yours
Truly
.

A.
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Farughi
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You are unable to complete your course – you have discontinued it. Write a letter to your teacher to thank him and explain –▪why have you discontinued it? ▪what are your reasons for thanking him/her? Write at v. 4

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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