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Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like. v.2

Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like. v. 2
Hello Anna, Hope you are doing well. I am extremely sorry for unable to write any letter for last couple of months due to some family emergency. As you were always interested to hear from me about various travelling details, I just cannot wait to tell you about my last travelling story. You may consider the place for your upcoming holiday planning if you wish. Let me tell you in details. I visited Thailand during last summer holiday. It was really amazing place to refresh your soul and mind with family. Mostly, people like you who are foodies, will love to visit Thailand. Nevertheless, Thailand is the paradise of array of street foods. We booked 5 star hotel with the benefit of free wi-fi and breakfast. If you have low-budget plan, don’t worry, you can get same benefits in apartment. Moreover, we can also enjoy various water sports in the island of Thailand. If you are not willing to get wet you can also visit to “Floating Market”. Let us meet again to have more discussion about it.
Hello Anna,

Hope you are doing well. I am
extremely
sorry for unable to write any letter for last couple of months due to
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some
family emergency.

As you were always interested to hear from me about various travelling
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details
, I
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just
cannot wait to
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tell
you about my last travelling story. You may consider the place for your upcoming holiday planning if you wish.

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Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
. I visited Thailand during last summer holiday. It was
really
amazing place to refresh your soul and mind with family.
Mostly
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
like you who are foodies, will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to visit Thailand.
Nevertheless
, Thailand is the paradise of array of street foods. We booked
'5 star' is missing a hyphen.
5 star
hotel with the benefit of free
Possible spelling mistake found.
wi-fi
and breakfast. If you have low-budget plan, don’t worry, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
same benefits in apartment.
Moreover
, we can
also
enjoy various water sports
The usual preposition for "island" is "on" not "in". Revise: "on the island".
in the island
of Thailand.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you are not willing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
wet you can
also
visit to “Floating Market”.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
us
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
again to have more discussion about it.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like. v. 2

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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