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You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area In that letter 1 Explain the problems 2 Suggest ways to help the situation 3 Propose a meet v.2

You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area In that letter 1 Explain the problems 2 Suggest ways to help the situation 3 Propose a meet v. 2
Dear Neighbors, Hope you all are good! I am writing this letter to share of the parking problem we I am facing since last month. Actually, these days I am getting late in the office, as I have to complete some time bound assignment. I usually reach the home late at 10 pm, and when I come I see that no vacant space is available in the parking area as it was fully occupied, may be some of us are having two vehicles or some are having guest visited to them. I suggest that name plate of the flat is to be painted by dividing the parking area, which will make it clear to all that where they have to park the vehicle, and if somebody have to park the extra car then it should be done outside at road or in the guest parking area which is located near community hall. Moreover, the guard should be provided the vehicle number of the car of all the residents so that he can guide the guest where they have to park when they visit. I have also planned a get together in this regards on next Sunday, in the evening at 4 pm. I think it will be convenient to all and everybody will be free at that time. So that suggestions of other to solve the issue can be taken and nobody have to face this situation in future. Hope that time will be suitable to all. Yours sincerely, Maninder Vadhrah Flat no 111B
Dear Neighbors,

Hope you all are
good
! I am writing this letter to share of the
parking
problem we I am facing since last month.

Actually, these days I am getting late in the office, as I
have to
complete
some
time bound assignment. I
usually
reach the home late at 10 pm, and when I
come
I
see
that no vacant space is available in the
parking
area as it was
fully
occupied, may be
some
of us are having two vehicles or
some
are having guest visited to them.

I suggest that name plate of the flat is to
be painted
by dividing the
parking
area, which will
make
it
clear
to all that where they
have to
park the vehicle, and if somebody
have
to park the extra car then it should
be done
outside at road or in the guest
parking
area which
is located
near community hall.
Moreover
, the guard should
be provided
the vehicle number of the car of all the residents
so
that he can guide the guest where they
have to
park when they visit.

I have
also
planned a
get
together in
this
regards on
next
Sunday, in the evening at 4 pm. I
think
it will be convenient to all and everybody will be free at that time.
So
that suggestions of other to solve the issue can
be taken
and nobody
have
to face this situation
in future
.

Hope that time will be suitable to all.

Yours
sincerely
,

Maninder
Vadhrah


Flat no 111B
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area In that letter 1 Explain the problems 2 Suggest ways to help the situation 3 Propose a meet v. 2

Letter
9 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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