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write a letter to your senior professor at university regarding the change of course-write which course you are pursuing currently-explain why you want to change-explain to which course you want to change v.2

write a letter to your senior professor at university regarding the change of course-write which course you are pursuing currently-explain why you want to change-explain to which course you want to change v. 2
Dear Mr. Sharma, I' m writing to let you know that i want to change my course in which i' m enrolled in my college now. Currently enrolled in computer science and engineering course, I would like to change to a new one. Kindly inform me if this would be possible. I heard that the last date for the change of course is 5th of june which is only six days from now and my friends were discussing that beyond this date it is difficult to change the course. The course has subjects like object oriented programming and web technology which is mostly programming oriented. I find programming to be very tough. In addition to this, the computer architecture subject is also very difficult to understand as it is a theoretical one. The civil engineering course has no programming lessons and consists of many practical subjects such as engineering graphics and construction oriented projection. Consequently, this course will be more interesting when compared with computer subjects. And hence, I request you to change my course and provide with the procedure that has to be carried out for changing the course. I apologise for any inconvenience this many cause to you and look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Gayathri Mohandas.
Dear Mr. Sharma,

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course
, I would like to
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change
to a new one. Kindly inform me if this would be possible. I heard that the last date for the
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change
of
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course
is 5th of
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june
which is
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six days from
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and my friends were discussing that beyond this date it is difficult to
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change
the course.

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has
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like
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object oriented
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programming
and web technology which is
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oriented. I find
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programming
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very
tough.
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to this, the computer architecture
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is
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difficult to understand as it is a theoretical one.

The civil engineering
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course
has no
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programming
lessons and consists of
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practical
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subjects
such as engineering graphics and construction oriented projection.
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, this
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course
will be more interesting when compared with computer
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. And
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change
my
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course
and provide with the procedure that
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for any inconvenience this
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to you and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS letter write a letter to your senior professor at university regarding the change of course-write which course you are pursuing currently-explain why you want to change-explain to which course you want to change v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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