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Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: -1. Give details of the job. 2. Explain why it is important to you. 3. Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. v.2

Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: -1. Give details of the job. 2. Explain why it is important to you. 3. Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. v. 2
Dear Mrs. Collingwood, I have written down this letter to request you for a reference required for the job application I am going to submit soon. The particulars of the job quite align with my field of study in business management and logistics. ABC Limited is currently hiring for the position of ‘shipping and warehousing service manager’ which I believe fully comply with my area of expertise. This position involves maintaining stock inventory levels, warehouse storage concept and maintaining safety procedures at the workplace. Moreover, while pursuing my management course in logistics, I used to visit warehouses for practical experience, and I believe this field interests me a lot. In addition, pay rates are relatively higher in logistics as compared to other management roles. Would you kindly consider writing me a genuine reference about your experience with me? You can also mention my overall performance throughout 2 academic years and practical knowledge I gained under your directions. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely Karan Galati
Dear Mrs. Collingwood,

I have written down this letter to request you for a reference required for the job application I am going to submit
soon
.

The particulars of the job quite align with my field of study in business management and logistics. ABC Limited is
currently
hiring for the position of ‘shipping and warehousing service manager’ which I believe
fully
comply with my area of expertise.

This position involves maintaining stock inventory levels, warehouse storage concept and maintaining safety procedures at the workplace.
Moreover
, while pursuing my management course in logistics, I
used
to visit warehouses for practical experience, and I believe this field interests me a lot.
In addition
, pay rates are
relatively
higher in logistics as compared to other management roles.

Would you kindly consider writing me a genuine reference about your experience with me? You can
also
mention my
overall
performance throughout 2 academic years and practical knowledge I gained under your directions.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely


Karan
Galati
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: -1. Give details of the job. 2. Explain why it is important to you. 3. Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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