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You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event 1 Explain why you are interested in helping 2 give details suitable past experience 3 suggest ways you might help with the event v.2

You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event 1 Explain why you are interested in helping 2 give details suitable past experience 3 suggest ways you might help with the event v. 2

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in regard to the advertisement published in the Times of India newspaper on Sunday. The advert was asking for some volunteers for a dancing event, which is going to be held on the next weekend in the town hall of the city. I would like to participate in this charity function. I am very much interested in helping for two main reasons. First and foremost, the reason for this free service is the cause of this event is very noble because the revenue from this function will be given to various orphanages. The second reason for the participation is dancing, as it is my hobby. I like to perform various shows and it would be my pleasure if my dancing skills can be valuable to others. I can prepare a traditional dance for my performance. The duration of the act could be 5 to 15 minutes and this can increase or decrease depending on the programme schedule. I would love to be an active volunteer for this noble deed. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Harman Kaur

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter in regard to the advertisement published in If the term is a proper noun, use the suggested capitalization.The Times of India
the Times of India
 newspaper on Sunday. The advert was asking for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 volunteers for a dancing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
, which is going to be held
 on the next
 weekend in the town hall of the city. I would like to participate in this charity function.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much interested in helping for two main reasons. First
 and foremost, the reason for this free service is the cause of this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 noble This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the revenue from this function will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to various orphanages. The second reason for the participation is dancing, as it is my hobby. I like to perform various This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 and it would be my pleasure if my dancing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 can be valuable to others.

I can prepare a traditional dance for my performance. The duration of the act could be 5 to 15 minutes and this can increase or decrease depending on the Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
 schedule. I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to be an active volunteer for this noble deed.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

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Harman
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Kaur

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event 1 Explain why you are interested in helping 2 give details suitable past experience 3 suggest ways you might help with the event v. 2

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

186 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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