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Task 1: - You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to: explain the reason why you decline the offerexpress your gratitudeexplain why you like your current job very v.4

Task 1: - You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to: explain the reason why you decline the offerexpress your gratitudeexplain why you like your current job very v. 4
Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the job offer in your esteemed company. I felt extremely delighted to receive the offer letter as I found the job description quite challenging and interesting. But unfortunately, I am not able to accept this responsibility due to my personal reasons. From the offer letter I happened to know that you have recruited me for the Manesar location which is very far off from my current residence which is Noida. Manesar is around 50-60km from Noida and it takes around 1. 5 to 2 hours to commute from Noida to Manesar. Being a patient of cervical spondylosis, my doctor has strictly advised me to avoid long hours travelling. So, it is extremely difficult for me join your Manesar office. Also, I like my current job a lot because of the work content and no travel time. My current office is hardly 10 minutes drive from my house and I have the flexibility to work from home as well. I can manage both my office and home quite efficiently and without much stress. I hope you would be able to understand my situation and would offer this job position to the next best suited candidate. Thanks for considering me for this position. Best regards, Tejinder
Dear Sir/Mam,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the
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job
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offer
in your esteemed
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company
. I felt
extremely
delighted to receive the
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offer
letter as I found the
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job
description quite challenging and interesting.

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But
unfortunately, I am not able to accept this responsibility due to my personal reasons. From the
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offer
letter I happened to know that you have recruited me for the
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Manesar
location which is
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very
far off from my
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current
residence which is Noida.
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Manesar
is around 50
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-60km
from Noida and it takes around 1. 5 to 2 hours to commute from Noida to
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Manesar
. Being a patient of cervical spondylosis, my doctor has
strictly
advised me to avoid long hours travelling.
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So
, it is
extremely
difficult for me
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join
your
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Manesar
office.
Also
, I like my
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current
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job
a lot
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because
of the work content and no travel time. My
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current
office is hardly 10 minutes drive from my
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house
and I have the flexibility to work from home
as well
. I can manage both my office and home quite
efficiently
and without much
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stress
.

I hope you would be able to understand my situation and would
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offer
this
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job
position to the
next
best suited candidate. Thanks for considering me for this position.

Best regards,

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Tejinder
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter Task 1: - You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to: explain the reason why you decline the offerexpress your gratitudeexplain why you like your current job very v. 4

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
215 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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