Dear John,
I am writing to ask you about a favor.
As you know I am a volunteer in a charitable organization. Currently I work as a doctor in a poor country that is located on a Caribbean island. Recently a severe hurricane hit the region, and now when it moved north, the size of the damage has become apparent. A large number of buildings have been flattered or seriously damaged; the people lost almost all their possessions. This situation should be addressed.
I decided to ask you to collect some money for my organization in order to help the region. I know that you have a big hearth and a huge number of acquaintances in business, admiration and educational institutions all of that makes you a perfect candidate for the job.
Firstly, you have a large number of followers on your Facebook page and Instagram account, I would like to that you posted an open letter in which you would describe the essence of the problem and ask them to donate as much money as they could. Secondly, organizing a charity auction or party in a local university would be helpful. I have already contacted the local university and got a response from the head master of the institution that he agrees to provide you with a place and all needed equipment to set up the event. Your task is to give him a call and talk over details.
I am waiting for your prompt response,
Sincerely yours,
Eugene.
Dear John,
I am writing to ask you about a favor.
As
you know I am a volunteer in a charitable organization.
Currently
I work as a doctor in a poor country that
is located
on a Caribbean island. Recently a severe hurricane hit the region, and
now
when it
moved
north, the size of the damage has become apparent.
A large number of
buildings have
been flattered
or
seriously
damaged; the
people
lost almost all their possessions. This situation should
be addressed
.
I decided to ask you to collect
some
money for my organization in order to
help
the region. I know that you have a
big
hearth and a huge number of acquaintances in business, admiration and educational institutions all of that
makes
you a perfect candidate for the job.
Firstly
, you have
a large number of
followers on your Facebook page and Instagram account, I would like to that you posted an open letter in which you would
describe
the essence of the problem and ask them to donate as much money as they could.
Secondly
, organizing a charity auction or party in a local university would be helpful. I have already contacted the local university and
got
a response from the head master of the institution that he
agrees
to provide you with a place and all needed equipment to set up the
event
. Your task is to give him a call and talk over
details
.
I am waiting for your prompt response,
Sincerely
yours,
Eugene.
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