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You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your deliveryexplain the importance of this deliveryask for a replacement it v. 2

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Bhawna Sharma, and I am writing in order to complain about the incomplete order that I received through your portal. I recently ordered a Samsung A20 mobile phone with order id ‘AM78798’ during your ongoing Diwali sale and the same was delivered to me on 22nd Oct 2019. However, when I opened the case, I found the charger missing from the accessories. Moreover, the earphones that were shipped along with the phone does not seem to be working. The mobile phone had a very special purpose as it was bought as a surprise Diwali gift for my father and the faulty delivery from your end has made all the efforts go down in vain. I am highly disappointed with this kind of service from an esteemed organization like yours. This negligence on your part has made the purchase unworthy. To avoid further embarrassment, I would suggest you to kindly send me a replacement of this product at the earliest. I look forward to receiving a replacement. Yours faithfully, Bhawna Sharma

IELTS letter You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your deliveryexplain the importance of this deliveryask for a replacement it v.2

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is
Bhawna
Sharma, and I am writing in order to complain about the incomplete order that I received through your portal. I recently ordered a Samsung A20 mobile phone with order id ‘AM78798’ during your ongoing Diwali sale and the same
was delivered
to me on 22nd Oct 2019.
However
, when I opened the case, I found the charger missing from the accessories.
Moreover
, the earphones that
were shipped
along with the phone does not seem to be working. The mobile phone had a
very
special purpose as it was
bought
as a surprise Diwali gift for my father and the faulty delivery from your
end
has made all the efforts go down in vain. I am
highly
disappointed with this kind of service from an esteemed organization like yours. This negligence on your part has made the
purchase
unworthy. To avoid
further
embarrassment, I would suggest you to kindly
send
me a replacement of this product at the earliest. I look forward to receiving a replacement. Yours
faithfully
,
Bhawna
Sharma
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Letter
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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