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Essay topics: You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: • Explain why you have gone to live in the new city• Describe the place where you are living• Invite your friend to come and se v.2

Essay topics: You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: • Explain why you have gone to live in the new city• Describe the place where you are living• Invite your friend to come and se v. 2
Hi John, I am sorry that I have not written to you for so long, the reason is that I have recently moved to Dallas. As you know, I have been working in the same company for almost eight years in the same position. Frankly, I even started to think about changing my work. Fortunately, I was promoted and now I am a head of a department but to get it I had to move to Taxes. Anyway, I rent a huge two-story cottage with a small garden and huge car garage for two cars. The neighborhood is calm and my novel office is situated around the corner. There is almost everything you may wish for having a comfortable life from a big shopping center to a gym with a water pool. Before I finish this letter, I would like to invite you to visit me this summer. I promise that you will be having a good time, of course, you may stay in my place; there is a plethora of room and all needed facilities are located nearby. Hope that you accept the invitation. Your friend, Eugene.
Hi John,

I am sorry that I have not written to you for
so
long, the reason is that I have recently
moved
to Dallas. As you know, I have been working in the same
company
for almost eight years in the same position.
Frankly
, I even
started
to
think
about changing my work.
Fortunately
, I
was promoted
and
now
I am a head of a department
but
to
get
it I had to
move
to Taxes.

Anyway, I rent a huge two-story cottage with a
small
garden and huge car garage for two cars. The neighborhood is calm and my novel office
is situated
around the corner. There is almost everything you may wish for having a comfortable life from a
big
shopping center to a gym with a water pool.

Before
I finish this letter, I would like to invite you to visit me this summer. I promise that you will be having a
good
time,
of course
, you may stay in my place; there is a plethora of room and all needed facilities
are located
nearby.

Hope that you accept the invitation.

Your friend,

Eugene.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS letter Essay topics: You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: • Explain why you have gone to live in the new city• Describe the place where you are living• Invite your friend to come and se v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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