Dear Mr. and Ms. Smith,
I am your neighbor next door and although my family moved in a month ago, we have not had a pleasure to meet you personally. The family consists of my wife, my beloved five-year-old daughter and me. The spouse works in a local hospital as a nurse, I am an engineer in big drilling company.
On 2nd March 2017, we are going to celebrate the sixth birthday of my princess. The party starts at 7: 00 pm and finishes at 10: 00 pm. There will be a small band who will play musical pieces from well-known cartoons and movies. For children, a big and tasty cake has been ordered in a local restaurant that is famous for its sweets, and adult guests will enjoy eating home-cooked barbeque if there is no rain. The party may be a little bit noisy and I hope that it will not disturb you too much.
Finally, I would like to invite you to participate in the celebration. There is no need in buying any presents because just your consent on having the party will be more than enough. Of course, visiting the event appears to be an ideal occasion to learn more about each other, and hopefully, to become friends.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
Dear Mr. and Ms. Smith,
I am your neighbor
next
door and although my family
moved
in a month ago, we have not had a pleasure to
meet
you
personally
. The family consists of my wife, my beloved five-year-
old
daughter and me. The spouse works in a local hospital as a nurse, I am an engineer in
big
drilling
company
.
On 2nd March 2017, we are going to celebrate the sixth birthday of my princess. The party
starts
at 7: 00 pm and finishes at 10: 00 pm. There will be a
small
band who will play musical pieces from well-known cartoons and movies. For children, a
big
and tasty cake has
been ordered
in a local restaurant
that is
famous
for its sweets, and adult guests will enjoy eating home-cooked
barbeque
if there is no rain. The party may be a
little bit
noisy and I hope that it will not disturb you too much.
Finally
, I would like to invite you to participate in the celebration. There is no need in buying any presents
because
just
your consent on having the party will be more than
enough
.
Of course
, visiting the
event
appears to be an ideal occasion to learn more about each other, and
hopefully
, to become friends.
Sincerely
yours,
Eugene
Dubinchuk
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes