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YOU RECENTLY ORDERED ONLINE SOMETHING. WHEN THE DELIVERY CAME IT WAS NOT COMPLETE. Write a letter to the compnay: 1) explain what you ordered and what is missing from your delivery2) explain the importance of this delivery3) ask for a replacement item to be v. 2

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this to complain about the unavailability of the mobile charger that I have received for order number FG5023. I ordered an Apple I-phone6 from your online website on 4th June 2019. The mobile phone was expected to deliver on 8th June, instead, I received it on 7th morning only, which made me happy and excited. On opening the packet, I found that the charger of mobile was missing. The phone without the charger is of no use to me. I want to gift this cell phone to my mother on her 50th Birthday on 15th June. Because of this special occasion, I ordered in advance, but due to unavailability of a charger, the phone cannot be used nor gifted. It is an emotional and significant moment for me to gift the desired cell phone to my mother on her special day. Since the phone cannot be operated without a charger, I would ask you to send me a new mobile phone with an original charger. I want the replacement as early as possible, due to the shortage of time. You can get it collected from the same address you delivered from Monday to Friday between 10 am to 6 pm. Hope my complaint will be given due consideration. Looking forward to quick replacement. Your' s faithfully John Patel.

IELTS letter YOU RECENTLY ORDERED ONLINE SOMETHING. WHEN THE DELIVERY CAME IT WAS NOT COMPLETE. Write a letter to the compnay: 1) explain what you ordered and what is missing from your delivery2) explain the importance of this delivery3) ask for a replacement item to be v.2

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this to complain about the unavailability of the mobile
charger
that I have received for order number FG5023. I ordered an Apple I-phone6 from your online website on 4th June 2019. The mobile
phone
was
expected
to deliver on 8th June,
instead
, I received it on 7th morning
only
, which made me happy and excited. On opening the packet, I found that the
charger
of mobile was missing. The
phone
without the
charger
is of no
use
to me. I want to gift this cell
phone
to my mother on her 50th Birthday on 15th June.
Because of this
special occasion, I ordered in advance,
but
due to unavailability of a
charger
, the
phone
cannot be
used
nor gifted. It is an emotional and significant moment for me to gift the desired cell
phone
to my mother on her special day. Since the
phone
cannot
be operated
without a
charger
, I would ask you to
send
me a new mobile
phone
with an original
charger
. I want the replacement as early as possible, due to the shortage of time. You can
get
it collected from the same address you delivered from Monday to Friday between 10 am to 6 pm. Hope my complaint will be
given
due consideration. Looking forward to quick replacement.
Your&
#039; s
faithfully
John Patel.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Letter
9 paragraphs
223 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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