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you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the v. 2

Dear Sir, I am a regular patron at your bank for the last couple of years. I am writing to complain about a cheque book which was ordered by me last month. First of all, I want you to know that I have been operating a chequing account since 2014. Last month, I have visited at your bank and fulfill all the requirements to get a cheque book and one of your employees told me that you would receive it within two weeks via mail. But unfortunately, I have not received such book till now. Moreover, it has been a month since I requested it. Due to this, I usually face a lot of problems to make financial transactions which are related to my business sector. Given the circumstances, My humble request is that please make an inquiry about an aforesaid matter and send me a new cheque book at the earliest possible. I am eagerly waiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely, Harrie

IELTS letter you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the v.2

Dear Sir, I am a regular patron at your bank for the last couple of years. I am writing to complain about a
cheque
book
which
was ordered
by me last month.
First of all
, I want you to know that I have been operating a
chequing
account since 2014. Last month, I have visited at your bank and fulfill all the requirements to
get
a
cheque
book
and one of your employees
told
me that you would receive it within two weeks via mail.
But
unfortunately, I have not received such
book
till
now
.
Moreover
, it has been a month since I requested it. Due to this, I
usually
face
a lot of
problems to
make
financial transactions which
are related
to my business sector.
Given
the circumstances, My humble request is that
please
make
an inquiry about an aforesaid matter and
send
me a new
cheque
book
at the earliest possible. I am
eagerly
waiting for your reply. Yours
Sincerely
,
Harrie
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
Letter
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≤ 6
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