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You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letterExplain how you heard about his/her retirementDescribe what made him/her such a great teacherSay how your teacher affected yo v.2

You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letterExplain how you heard about his/her retirementDescribe what made him/her such a great teacherSay how your teacher affected yo v. 2
Dear Ms Sally, I am writing to send you good wishes for your upcoming retirement. Recently, I ran across my high school friend, James Smith, He informed me that you are retiring on may after 40years of teaching at our school. I want you to know how much your teaching impacted my life. As you may remember, I used to struggle a lot in English before I took your class. To be honest, I still remember dreading in your first class. However, Your excitement in the subject made me excited as well. The way of your story telling has helped me a lot in understanding pronunciation of words in English. I know you saw me struggling while reading it, but you were always encouraging and you helped me learn from my mistakes. By the end of that school year, I felt confident about English and, to my own surprise, I enjoyed it! I ended up studying engineering in college and got a good job as software engineer. I am consistently required to have daily meeting with US clients. I believe without your amazing classes, I would not have been able to successfully interact with clients in English without any hesitation. Thank you for all your support and enduring impact you have had on my life. Yours sincerely, xxx
Dear Ms Sally,

I am writing to
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send
you
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good
wishes for your upcoming retirement.

Recently, I ran across my high school friend, James Smith, He informed me that you are retiring on may after 40years of teaching at our school.

I want you to know how much
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your
teaching impacted my life. As you may remember, I
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used
to struggle a lot in English
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before
I took your
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class
. To be honest, I
still
remember dreading in your
first
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class
.
However
, Your excitement in the subject made me excited
as well
. The way of your story telling has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me a lot in understanding pronunciation of words in English. I know you
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saw
me struggling while reading it,
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but
you were always encouraging and you
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helped
me learn from my mistakes.

By the
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end
of that school year, I felt confident about English and, to my
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own
surprise, I enjoyed it! I ended up studying engineering in college and
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got
a
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good
job as software engineer. I am
consistently
required to have daily meeting with US clients.
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I
believe without your amazing classes, I would not have been able to
successfully
interact with clients in English without any hesitation.

Thank you for all your support and enduring impact you have had on my life.

Yours
sincerely
,

xxx
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
The most intimate temper of a people, its deepest soul, is above all in its language.
Jules Michelet

IELTS letter You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letterExplain how you heard about his/her retirementDescribe what made him/her such a great teacherSay how your teacher affected yo v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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