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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to -explain the reason why you decline the offer-express your gratitude-explain you like your current job very much v.6

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to -explain the reason why you decline the offer-express your gratitude-explain you like your current job very much v. 6
Hello Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to job offer that you have sent to me recently. At the beginning I am glad to be offered a position of website developer in your company. But I regret to say that I cannot accept the offer right now. Right now, I am a part of the big project in my current company and this is one of the reasons why I cannot accept your offer. This project is related to the health and environment situation in Asian countries. Moreover, I have work agreement which not allow me to resign for my position for the next two years. In addition, I feel extremely satisfied from my job and the project we are working on. I really appreciate of the job position that I have received from your company and have hope to be a part of your company in the future. I am thankful to you for an opportunity you have offered me. However, considering my actual position and satisfaction, of the current employment I must decline your offer. I wish all the best for your company. Your sincerely, Tomasz Zawadzki
Hello Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offer
that you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to me recently.

At the beginning I am glad to
be offered
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
of website developer in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
.
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But
I regret to say that I cannot accept the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offer
right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.

Right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, I am a part of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
project in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
and this is one of the reasons why I cannot accept your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offer
. This project
is related
to the health and environment situation in Asian countries.
Moreover
, I have work agreement which not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to resign for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
for the
next
two years.
In addition
, I feel
extremely
satisfied from my job and the project we are working on.

I
really
appreciate of the job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
that I have received from your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
and have hope to be a part of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
in the future. I am thankful to you for an opportunity you have offered me.
However
, considering my actual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
and satisfaction, of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
employment I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
decline your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offer
. I wish all the best for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

Tomasz
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Zawadzki
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
If we spoke a different language, we would perceive a somewhat different world.
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IELTS letter You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to -explain the reason why you decline the offer-express your gratitude-explain you like your current job very much v. 6

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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