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Currently there is a trend towrds the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? v.1

Currently there is a trend towrds the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. v. 1
Medicine is an essential kind in most society nowadays especially the part of urban life who going to consume natural drugs for health care such as alternative between chemical medicine. Although it is necessary to search factual data about worse effect when it use without recommended by experts or bad side an alchemy drug. It is being important to drugs consumers now to consume another different way to used natural ingredients for health such as fruits, vegetables or spices for cured from viruses and so on. China, for an example still reverse natural antibiotic to help people who sick and to detoxify poisons from human bodies. So, many modern society believed that natural health care such as bruise, acupuncture, message, is the best choice health system. However, it can be seen so less experts who can handle and have skills for cured people with alternative drug. Afterwards, many results that showed the strength of natural resource is better than another synthetic drug. In contrary, synthetic drug had a licence and guarantee for people. In hospitals, it can be seen that Doctor always suggested people to eat pills, beside fruits. We can' t refuse that hospital regulation had an experts resource and more efficient than other kind of health worker in another places. For example, in United States of America has apply a chemical pharmacy in a large system for hospital to remedies people from viruses. Finally, American people addicted to consume chemical drugs and considered to antibiotic. To conclude, although the major of citizen in the world choose to go to the hospital, people can' t deny that natural drug more save than chemical. So, public should take good care of their bodies and give a better choice to use environment friendly medicine.
Medicine is an essential kind in most society nowadays
especially
the part of urban life who going to consume
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
for
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health
care such as alternative between
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chemical
medicine. Although it is necessary to search factual data about worse effect when it
Did you mean "uses"?
use
without recommended by experts or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
side an alchemy drug.

It is being
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important
to
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drugs
consumers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
to consume another
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different
way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
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natural
ingredients for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
such as fruits, vegetables or spices for
The usual collocation for "cured" is "of" not "". Did you mean "cured of"?
cured from
viruses and
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so
on. China, for an example
still
reverse
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natural
antibiotic to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
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people
who sick and to detoxify poisons from human bodies.
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So
,
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many
modern society believed that
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natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
care such as bruise, acupuncture, message, is the best choice
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health
system.
However
, it can be
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seen
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so
Did you mean "fewer"? The noun experts is countable.
less
experts who can handle and have
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skills
for cured
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people
with alternative
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drug
. Afterwards,
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many
results that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
the strength of
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natural
resource is better than another synthetic drug.

In contrary, synthetic
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drug
had a
Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.
licence
and guarantee for
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people
. In
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hospitals
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that Doctor always suggested
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people
to eat pills, beside fruits. We
Possible spelling mistake found.
can&
#039; t refuse that
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hospital
regulation had an experts resource and more efficient than other kind of
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health
worker in another places.
For example
,
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United States".
in United States
of America has
Use past participle here: "applied".
apply
a
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chemical
pharmacy in a large system for
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hospital
to remedies
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people
from viruses.
Finally
, American
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people
addicted to consume
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chemical
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drugs
and considered to antibiotic.

To conclude
, although the major of citizen in the world choose to go to the
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hospital
,
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people
Possible spelling mistake found.
can&
#039; t deny that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
more save than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chemical
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, public should take
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
care of their bodies and give a better choice to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
environment friendly medicine.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter Currently there is a trend towrds the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. v. 1

Letter
  American English
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293 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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