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You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it Write a letter to the local authority and say How did you get to know about the plans What problems will your neighborhood face Suggest possible v. 1

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern with building a new airport in my local area, Wasteria Lane. All local media broadcast this unpleasant news yesterday and I should mention that none my community are happy about this plan. Firstly, there is a lavish park in my area that is the best place for tranquility and majority of my neighbors spend their free time in this open space, however, for having a new airport, it should be diminished. So you can imagine how much I disappointed when finding it. Secondly, living near an airport means that people who live nearby should tolerate with all noise of arrivals and departures and it would not be easy for elderly and children. Besides, I heard apart from the negative effect of loud noise, air pollution of the airport has lots of bad consequence on vulnerable people. There is a local airport just 200 kilometers away from my home. I think it would be a good idea to develop an existing local airport instead of building a new one. In this case, the local authority could take advantages and save some budget. I look forward to hearing from you.

IELTS letter You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it Write a letter to the local authority and say How did you get to know about the plans What problems will your neighborhood face Suggest possible v.1

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern with building a
new
airport
in my
local
area,
Wasteria
Lane. All
local
media broadcast this unpleasant
news
yesterday and I should mention that none my community are happy about this plan.
Firstly
, there is a lavish park in my area
that is
the best place for tranquility and
majority of
my neighbors spend their free time in this open space,
however
, for having a
new
airport
, it should
be diminished
.
So
you can imagine how much I disappointed when finding it.
Secondly
, living near an
airport
means that
people
who
live
nearby should tolerate with all noise of arrivals and departures and it would not be easy for elderly and children.
Besides
, I heard apart from the
negative
effect of loud noise, air pollution of the
airport
has lots of
bad
consequence on vulnerable
people
. There is a
local
airport
just
200 kilometers away from my home. I
think
it would be a
good
idea
to develop an existing
local
airport
instead
of building a
new
one.
In this case
, the
local
authority could take advantages and save
some
budget. I look forward to hearing from you.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Letter
6 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resources: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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