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you are a unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter. -Explain where you live-describe the problem-give reason why do not v.2

you are a unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter. -Explain where you live-describe the problem-give reason why do not v. 2
I am dweller of Chandigarh and live in sector 28. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to request you to donot develop the airport. Because many people' s are not happy about this plan. I am resident of Chandigarh sector 28. It is a huge area of Chandigarh and good businessmen are live there. Yesterday, I read the newspaper and saw the advertisement of Airport that is related to the development. The government take the season to develop the airport. Because this airport is smart and now is able to construct a big airport and increasing number of flights at my house distance is many kilometre from airport flights creating noise pollution and some other pollution that will able to affect the human body and I was happy from this decision. The biggest thing is this the flight create more pollution and they cover big area. Many people houses are include the land of airport. So, The People' s where can leave after left the house. So that' s way I do not want develoment of airport. so I would be appreciate if you give adequate space for this article on your newspaper, so many people read this article and stand with me, after this maybe government should change decision you are a dirty about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport
I am dweller of Chandigarh and
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live
in sector 28. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to request you to
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donot
develop the
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airport
.
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Because
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many
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people&
#039; s are not happy about this plan.

I am resident of Chandigarh sector 28. It is a huge area of Chandigarh and
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good
businessmen are
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live
there. Yesterday, I read the newspaper and
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saw
the
The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?
advertisement of
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Airport
that
is related
to the development. The
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government
take the season to develop the
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airport
.
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Because
this
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airport
is smart and
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now
is able to construct a
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big
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airport
and increasing number of
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flights
at my
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house
distance is
Possible agreement error. The noun kilometre seems to be countable; consider using: "many kilometres".
many kilometre
from
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airport
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flights
creating noise pollution and
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some
other pollution that
Did you mean "will be able"?
will able
to affect the human
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
body and
I was happy from this decision.

The biggest thing is this the
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flight
create more
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
pollution and
they cover
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big
area.
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Many
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people
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houses
are
Consider using a past participle here: "included".
include
the land of
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airport
.
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So
, The
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People&
#039; s where can
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leave
after
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left
the
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house
.
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So
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that&
#039; s way I do not want
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develoment
of
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airport
.
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so
I would be
Consider using the past participle "appreciated"?
appreciate
if you give adequate space for this article on your newspaper,
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so
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many
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people
read this article and stand with me, after this maybe
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government
should
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change
decision you are a dirty about a plan to
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make
you local
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airport
bigger and increasing the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flights
were you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
near the
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
airport
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS letter you are a unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter. -Explain where you live-describe the problem-give reason why do not v. 2

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
238 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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