Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. In your letter include: - What delayed you, - how missing this flight affected you, - what you would like the airport to v. 2

To whom it may concern; Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your domestic departure elevator that lead some serious problem while I was flying from New York, The Usa to Heathrow airportin London, The UK. Please allow me to accentuate with details. As we were going to international terminal, we wanted to use corner lift with my partner. At first step, everything was usual as we had expected but unusual thing is that it remained middle of 3rd building and stopped moving up. In spite of fact that I pressed help button more than twenty times, any staff did not respond us to call helping. Finally, we reached ground floor after we had been waiting for a long time but it had not been finished yet. Much worse scenario is that we were late and were not able to attend boarding and aircraft due to this small fault. We were expecting to join sales conference in London in which will provide much more knowledge on our future career. I fully hope that you understand that I was very disappointed about this issue. As a manager of Human Resources you might check and repair the all lift and other equipment of facilities. I would be grateful so that anyone would not find themselves such difficult circumstances. I look forward to hearing from you positive response in the near future. Your faithfully.

IELTS letter Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. In your letter include: - What delayed you, - how missing this flight affected you, - what you would like the airport to v.2

To whom it may concern;

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your domestic departure elevator that lead
some
serious problem while I was flying from New York, The
Usa
to Heathrow
airportin
London, The UK.

Please
allow
me to accentuate with
details
.

As we were going to international terminal, we wanted to
use
corner lift with my partner. At
first
step, everything was usual as we had
expected
but
unusual thing is that it remained middle of 3rd building and
stopped
moving up.

In spite of
fact that I pressed
help
button more than twenty times, any staff did not respond us to call helping.
Finally
, we reached
ground floor
after we had been waiting for a long time
but
it had not
been finished
yet
.

Much worse scenario is that we were late and were not able to attend boarding and aircraft due to this
small
fault.

We were expecting to
join
sales conference in London in which will provide much more knowledge on our future career.

I
fully
hope that you understand that I was
very
disappointed about this issue. As a manager of Human Resources you might
check
and repair the all lift and other equipment of facilities.

I would be grateful
so
that anyone would not find themselves such difficult circumstances.

I look forward to hearing from you
positive
response in the near future.

Your
faithfully
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
Knowledge of languages is the doorway to wisdom.
Roger Bacon
Letter
12 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar letter posts: