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27. 10. 2017 Something in an airport delayed you and you missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. in your letter include: • What delayed you? • How missing this flight affect you? • What would you like the airport v.2

27. 10. 2017 Something in an airport delayed you and you missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. in your letter include: • What delayed you? • How missing this flight affect you? • What would you like the airport v. 2
Dear Sir or Madame, I am writing to complain about the work of your airport security service. On 29th March 2017 I should have flown by Airbus A320, the flight number SU0310 from Moscow t New York but unfortunately, it has never happened. While commuting to the airport my taxi cab got involved in a car accident. As a result, I got hit in a face by an airbag that broke my nose and made me look like a panda bear. After I got required treatment, I arrived at the destination but despite having all needed documents I was not allowed inside the plane by the security of the building. So, I missed my flight. As a result of not getting on the airplane, my firm has faced problems with the investors with whom I should have had a meeting. They assumed my absence was a sign of disrespect and poor character. In addition, I did not visit the wedding of my first daughter that was scheduled later that day and was held in a New York restaurant. I demand that the airport administration refunds the money I spent on renting a hotel room while waiting for another flight as well as for other expenditures that were caused by the delay such as transportation costs. Finally, I would like to hear words of apology from you as well. I am waiting for your prompt response. Sincerely yours, Eugene Dubinchuk.
Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing to complain about the work of your airport security service. On 29th March 2017 I should have flown by Airbus A320, the flight number SU0310 from Moscow t New York
but
unfortunately, it has never happened.
While
commuting to the airport my taxi cab
got
involved in a car accident.
As a result
, I
got
hit in a face by an airbag that broke my nose and made me look like a panda bear. After I
got
required treatment, I arrived at the destination
but
despite having all needed documents I was not
allowed
inside the
plane
by the security of the building.
So
, I missed my flight.

As a result
of not getting on the airplane, my firm has faced problems with the investors with whom I should have had a meeting. They assumed my absence was a
sign
of disrespect and poor character.
In addition
, I did not visit the wedding of my
first
daughter that
was scheduled
later that day and
was held
in a New York restaurant.

I demand that the airport administration refunds the money I spent on renting a hotel room while waiting for another flight
as well
as for other expenditures that
were caused
by the delay such as transportation costs.
Finally
, I would like to hear words of apology from you
as well
.

I am waiting for your prompt response.

Sincerely
yours,

Eugene
Dubinchuk
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter 27. 10. 2017 Something in an airport delayed you and you missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. in your letter include: • What delayed you? • How missing this flight affect you? • What would you like the airport v. 2

Letter
7 paragraphs
239 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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