Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to invite you to visit my birthday party.
My name is Eugene, I and my girlfriend recently moved to your calm and beautiful neighborhood. My beloved woman works as a nurse in a hospital and I am an engineer in a local drilling company who has recently was promoted to a new position.
On 2nd March I am going to have a birthday party. There will be a musical band who will play country and rock music. The group is well-known on the local level for its excellent performances.
Moreover, more than fifty pizzas and twenty-five boxes of beer have been ordered. So, the celebration may last for several hours and be noisy, I hope that you will let this party happen and it will not you disturb you too much.
I also invite you to participate in the party. This event provides all visitors with indispensable opportunity to make a lot of new acquaintances among local folks. And, I have an intention to stay in this neighborhood for a long period of time and likely to start my own family. So, becoming friends with my neighbors is another reason to invite you.
I hope you accept my invitation.
Sincerely yours,
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to invite you to visit my birthday party.
My name is Eugene, I and my girlfriend recently
moved
to your calm and
beautiful
neighborhood. My beloved woman works as a nurse in a
hospital and
I am an engineer in a local drilling
company
who has recently
was
promoted to a new position.
On 2nd March I am going to have a birthday party. There will be a musical band who will play country and rock music. The group is well-known on the local level for its excellent performances.
Moreover
, more than fifty pizzas and twenty-five boxes of beer have
been ordered
.
So
, the celebration may last for several hours and be noisy, I hope that you will
let
this party happen and it
will not you
disturb you too much.
I
also
invite you to participate in the party. This
event
provides all visitors with indispensable opportunity to
make
a lot of
new acquaintances among local folks. And, I have an intention to stay in this neighborhood for a long period of time and likely to
start
my
own
family.
So
, becoming friends with my neighbors is another reason to invite you.
I hope you accept my invitation.
Sincerely
yours,
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