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07. 10. 2017You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. 1. Introduce yourself2. Describe your plans for the party3. invite yo v.2

07. 10. 2017You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. 1. Introduce yourself2. Describe your plans for the party3. invite yo v. 2
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to invite you to visit my birthday party. My name is Eugene, I and my girlfriend recently moved to your calm and beautiful neighborhood. My beloved woman works as a nurse in a hospital and I am an engineer in a local drilling company who has recently was promoted to a new position. On 2nd March I am going to have a birthday party. There will be a musical band who will play country and rock music. The group is well-known on the local level for its excellent performances. Moreover, more than fifty pizzas and twenty-five boxes of beer have been ordered. So, the celebration may last for several hours and be noisy, I hope that you will let this party happen and it will not you disturb you too much. I also invite you to participate in the party. This event provides all visitors with indispensable opportunity to make a lot of new acquaintances among local folks. And, I have an intention to stay in this neighborhood for a long period of time and likely to start my own family. So, becoming friends with my neighbors is another reason to invite you. I hope you accept my invitation. Sincerely yours,
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to invite you to visit my birthday party.

My name is Eugene, I and my girlfriend recently
moved
to your calm and
beautiful
neighborhood. My beloved woman works as a nurse in a
hospital and
I am an engineer in a local drilling
company
who has recently
was
promoted to a new position.

On 2nd March I am going to have a birthday party. There will be a musical band who will play country and rock music. The group is well-known on the local level for its excellent performances.

Moreover
, more than fifty pizzas and twenty-five boxes of beer have
been ordered
.
So
, the celebration may last for several hours and be noisy, I hope that you will
let
this party happen and it
will not you
disturb you too much.

I
also
invite you to participate in the party. This
event
provides all visitors with indispensable opportunity to
make
a lot of
new acquaintances among local folks. And, I have an intention to stay in this neighborhood for a long period of time and likely to
start
my
own
family.
So
, becoming friends with my neighbors is another reason to invite you.

I hope you accept my invitation.

Sincerely
yours,
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter 07. 10. 2017You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. 1. Introduce yourself2. Describe your plans for the party3. invite yo v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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