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Your friend has asked to recommend a music teacher for his child. Write a letter giving details. 1. How you know about the teacher2. Why you recommend3. Tell how further information can be obtained about lessons. v.2

Your friend has asked to recommend a music teacher for his child. Write a letter giving details. 1. How you know about the teacher2. Why you recommend3. Tell how further information can be obtained about lessons. v. 2
Dear Prathap, How are you and your family? It has been so long since I have written and I also got your letter enquiring about a local music teacher for your daughter. Fortunate for you that I know a reputed musician who is willing to teach your daughter. I and this musician named John were good friends from our childhood days. Since he is in music field, I asked him to suggest a good tutor for you; however, to my surprise, he was willing to train your daughter as a token of friendship. I would recommend you strongly to accept this offer because he is one of the top musicians in Chennai city. Moreover, he won several awards for his compositions in movies. So, I believe, it cannot get better than this. In addition, I would also suggest you to subscribe to musical lessons from " www. music. com& quot; website which would provide you with basics of the instruments and sounds. It costs around 50 dollars and you will receive 50 hours of practice lessons. Anyway, thanks for asking my suggestions. But please do write back immediately about your decision, so that I could keep John informed. Best Wishes, Raj S
Dear
Prathap
,

How are you and your family? It has been
so
long since I have written and I
also
got
your letter
enquiring
about a local music teacher for your daughter. Fortunate for you that I know a reputed musician who is willing to teach your daughter.

I and this musician named John were
good
friends from our childhood days. Since he is in music field, I asked him to suggest a
good
tutor for you;
however
, to my surprise, he was willing to train your daughter as a token of friendship.

I would recommend you
strongly
to accept this offer
because
he is one of the top musicians in Chennai city.
Moreover
, he won several awards for his compositions in movies.
So
, I believe, it cannot
get
better than this.

In addition
, I would
also
suggest you to subscribe to musical lessons from
&quot
;
www
.
music
.
com&amp
; quot; website which would provide you with basics of the instruments and sounds. It costs around 50 dollars and you will receive 50 hours of practice lessons.

Anyway, thanks for asking my suggestions.
But
please
do write back immediately about your decision,
so
that I could
keep
John informed.

Best Wishes,

Raj S
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your friend has asked to recommend a music teacher for his child. Write a letter giving details. 1. How you know about the teacher2. Why you recommend3. Tell how further information can be obtained about lessons. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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