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blob: https: //web. whatsapp. com/e59405e1-8f8e-437a-a69a-ed50f30d0337The charts below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1980 and 2008. v.2

blob: https: //web. whatsapp. com/e59405e1-8f8e-437a-a69a-ed50f30d0337The charts below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1980 and 2008. v. 2
A breakdown of the percentage of household spending patterns in two different nations between 1980 and 2008 is presented in the diagram. Between 1980 and 2008, UK’s leisure showed a slightly decrease as similarly as food and drink in New Zealand but it was still notable as the highest of others. But food and drink in UK decreased more significant than others. In other hand, there was a less decline of the percentage New Zealand’s leisure and transport in both countries over those periods. By contrast, there had been a slight incline in utility exactly in the percentage of UK from 26 to just over a quarter. Whereas New Zealand’s utility had showed an increase sharply to just over a third. In the other hand, others in both countries had remained reasonably steady between two years. Overall, Although, UK’ leisure and New Zealand’s food and drink showed a decline as the same as some others, but the total percentage of households showed that both of them remained dominance as the highest of others. In other side, during those period saw a steady remain in others in both nations. While, there had been a good marked growth in both countries’ utility
A breakdown of the
percentage
of household spending patterns in two
different
nations between 1980 and 2008
is presented
in the diagram.

Between 1980 and 2008, UK’s leisure
showed
a
slightly decrease
as
similarly
as food and drink in
New
Zealand
but
it was
still
notable as the highest of others.
But
food and drink in UK decreased more significant than others. In
other
hand, there was a less decline of the
percentage
New
Zealand’s leisure and transport in both countries over those periods.

By contrast, there had been a slight incline in utility exactly in the
percentage
of UK from 26 to
just
over a quarter.
Whereas
New
Zealand’s utility had
showed
an increase
sharply
to
just
over a third. In the
other
hand, others in both countries had remained
reasonably
steady between two years.

Overall
, Although, UK’ leisure and
New
Zealand’s food and drink
showed
a decline as the same as
some
others,
but
the total
percentage
of households
showed
that both of them remained dominance as the highest of others. In
other
side, during those period
saw
a steady remain in others in both nations.
While
, there had been a
good marked
growth in both countries’ utility
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter blob: https: //web. whatsapp. com/e59405e1-8f8e-437a-a69a-ed50f30d0337The charts below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1980 and 2008. v. 2

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