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A local magazine editor has asked for readers’ opinions about the magazine. Write a letter to the magazineeditor. In the letter, * Describe what made you choose the magazine* What do you like and dislike about the magazine* Suggest the improvements you w v.2

A local magazine editor has asked for readers’ opinions about the magazine. Write a letter to the magazineeditor. In the letter, * Describe what made you choose the magazine* What do you like and dislike about the magazine* Suggest the improvements you w v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my opinion on the magazine " Your Sports" . I prefer this magazine because of its uniqueness to cover the lifestyle of the sports persons, not limited to the activities of their daily life but also the stories they share with the interviewers. I am a big fan of cricket that I read a lot of sports magazine. But I must admit that I eagerly wait for the issues of " Your Sports" because from there, I get numerous volume of information on my favorite athletes. Moreover, I try to cope with the fashion trend of my preferred stars after going through the articles on specific sportsman. However, I get bored at the moment I go through colorful advertisement pages as those vibrant colors easily distract my mind from the main story. I would like to suggest that the magazine shall be equipped with more contents rich with sports news. As this maganize is tremendously gaining popularity among the sports enthusiasts, may be this is high time you consider focusing on more sportsters and keeping the advertisements on the corners rather than granting them full pages. I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity to share my opinion on the magazine that I like most. Yours faithfully, Tasnim Fahmi
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my opinion on the
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magazine
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&quot
; Your
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Sports&quot
;
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I prefer this
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magazine
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because
of its uniqueness to cover the lifestyle of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
persons, not limited to the activities of their daily life
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but
also
the stories they share with the interviewers.

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I
am a
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big
fan of cricket that I read
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a lot of
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sports
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magazine
.
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But
I
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must
admit that I
eagerly
wait for the issues of
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&quot
; Your
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Sports&quot
;
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because
from there, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
numerous volume of information on my favorite athletes.
Moreover
, I try to cope with the fashion trend of my preferred stars after going through the articles on specific sportsman.
However
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
bored at the moment I go through colorful advertisement pages as those vibrant colors
easily
distract my mind from the main story.

I would like to suggest that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
magazine
shall
be equipped
with more contents rich with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
news. As this
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maganize
is
tremendously
gaining popularity among the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
enthusiasts, may be this is high time you consider focusing on more
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sportsters
and keeping the advertisements on the corners
rather
than granting them full pages.

I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity to share my opinion on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
magazine
that I like most.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Tasnim
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Fahmi
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS letter A local magazine editor has asked for readers’ opinions about the magazine. Write a letter to the magazineeditor. In the letter, * Describe what made you choose the magazine* What do you like and dislike about the magazine* Suggest the improvements you w v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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