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You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good newswith your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● explain where the money came from● say what you intend to do with the money● invite your friend v.2

You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good newswith your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● explain where the money came from● say what you intend to do with the money● invite your friend v. 2
Dear Jay, I' m fine, and I hope you are doing good too. I feel delighted to share a piece of good news that I won a prize bond, which I had bought a few months ago. As you know, I had purchased some prize bond from my pocket-money. Although I was not sure at the time of purchase, I will really win it. But, when I received a call from a bank representative that I had won the prize of amount one million dollars, my joy knew no bounds, and I thanked God for His mercy upon me. What is more important, because it is a huge amount, it should be spent wisely. So I’m planning that I' ll divide this money into chunks, and donate a handsome amount for charity to an organization which is located. I' ll also pay my university fees for the remaining semesters. I’d like to invite you this weekend to be a part of my happiness. I’m planning to throw a party at a five-star restaurant to celebrate this great news. If you are not available this weekend, I will shift this event to the next date for your convenience. Let me know about your plans at the earliest. Best regard, Saira Bano
Dear Jay,

I&
#039; m fine, and I hope you are doing
good
too. I feel delighted to share a piece of
good
news that I won a prize bond, which I had
bought
a few months ago.

As you know, I had
purchased
some
prize bond from my pocket-money. Although I was not sure at the time of
purchase
, I will
really
win it.
But
, when I received a call from a bank representative that I had won the prize of amount one million dollars, my joy knew no bounds, and I thanked God for His mercy upon me.

What is more
important
,
because
it is a huge amount, it should
be spent
wisely
.
So
I’m planning that
I&
#039; ll divide this money into chunks, and donate a handsome amount for charity to an organization which
is located
.
I&
#039; ll
also
pay my university fees for the remaining semesters.

I’d like to invite you this weekend to be a part of my happiness. I’m planning to throw a party at a five-star restaurant to celebrate this great news. If you are not available this weekend, I will shift this
event
to the
next
date for your convenience.

Let
me know about your plans at the earliest.

Best
regard
,

Saira
Bano
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good newswith your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● explain where the money came from● say what you intend to do with the money● invite your friend v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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