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You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good newswith your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● explain where the money came from● say what you intend to do with the money● invite your friend v. 2

Dear Jay, I' m fine, and I hope you are doing good too. I feel delighted to share a piece of good news that I won a prize bond, which I had bought a few months ago. As you know, I had purchased some prize bond from my pocket-money. Although I was not sure at the time of purchase, I will really win it. But, when I received a call from a bank representative that I had won the prize of amount one million dollars, my joy knew no bounds, and I thanked God for His mercy upon me. What is more important, because it is a huge amount, it should be spent wisely. So I’m planning that I' ll divide this money into chunks, and donate a handsome amount for charity to an organization which is located. I' ll also pay my university fees for the remaining semesters. I’d like to invite you this weekend to be a part of my happiness. I’m planning to throw a party at a five-star restaurant to celebrate this great news. If you are not available this weekend, I will shift this event to the next date for your convenience. Let me know about your plans at the earliest. Best regard, Saira Bano

IELTS letter You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good newswith your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● explain where the money came from● say what you intend to do with the money● invite your friend v.2

Dear Jay,
I&
#039; m fine, and I hope you are doing
good
too. I feel delighted to share a piece of
good
news that I won a prize bond, which I had
bought
a few months ago. As you know, I had
purchased
some
prize bond from my pocket-money. Although I was not sure at the time of
purchase
, I will
really
win it.
But
, when I received a call from a bank representative that I had won the prize of amount one million dollars, my joy knew no bounds, and I thanked God for His mercy upon me.
What is more
important
,
because
it is a huge amount, it should
be spent
wisely
.
So
I’m planning that
I&
#039; ll divide this money into chunks, and donate a handsome amount for charity to an organization which
is located
.
I&
#039; ll
also
pay my university fees for the remaining semesters. I’d like to invite you this weekend to be a part of my happiness. I’m planning to throw a party at a five-star restaurant to celebrate this great news. If you are not available this weekend, I will shift this
event
to the
next
date for your convenience.
Let
me know about your plans at the earliest.
Best
regard
,
Saira
Bano
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Letter
8 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≤ 6
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