you recently changed job and you want to tell a person who you used to work with about your change of job write a letter to that person in your letter describe your new job explain whether you think it was a good idea to change job suggest that you meet a v.2
you recently changed job and you want to tell a person who you used to work with about your change of job write a letter to that person in your letter describe your new job explain whether you think it was a good idea to change job suggest that you meet a v. 2
Dear Sue,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to tell you about my new job. As you know, after my daughter is born, my salary didn’t satisfy all my family’s desires. So, I had to work evening in order that I can fulfill all our needs or change my career.
At first, I was a little uncertain about that. But, consulting with my parents and husband, I found that it is well worth the effort. Because not only does my new job give me the opportunity to progress, but also the new company offers some profits such as transfer, lunch and shopping token. And, all of them can cut down some of my excessive cost.
My new career is in accordance with< span class=" hiddenGrammarError" pre=" career " > < /span> the previous one. Besides that, I am responsible for going to other countries and organize the company meeting with other enterprises, through which I can achieve delightful< span class=" hiddenSuggestion" pre=" and " > < /span> and useful experiences. I have got some news to tell you, so it would be great if we could see each other next Friday.
I look forward to catching up with you soon.
All the best,
Helia
Dear Sue,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to
tell
you about my
new
job. As you know, after my daughter
is born
, my salary didn’t satisfy all my family’s desires.
So
, I had to work evening in order that I can fulfill all our needs or
change
my career.
At
first
, I was a
little
uncertain about that.
But
, consulting with my parents and husband, I found that it is well worth the effort.
Because
not
only
does my
new
job give me the opportunity to progress,
but
also
the
new
company
offers
some
profits such as transfer, lunch and shopping token. And, all of them can
cut
down
some
of my excessive cost.
My
new
career is in accordance
with<
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; the previous one.
Besides
that, I am responsible for going to other countries and organize the
company
meeting with other enterprises, through which I can achieve
delightful<
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class
=
"
;
hiddenSuggestion"
;
pre
=
"
; and
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>
;
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span>
; and useful experiences. I have
got
some
news
to
tell
you,
so
it would be great if we could
see
each other
next
Friday.
I look forward to catching up with you
soon
.
All the best,
Helia
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5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Mistakes