Write a letter to the council for the dirty street: Explain why it has become dirty recentlyWhat problem it has causedGiving some suggestions. v.2
Write a letter to the council for the dirty street: Explain why it has become dirty recentlyWhat problem it has causedGiving some suggestions. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the sanitation and cleanliness problems on our favorite Smith street. Nowadays, the garbage collection vans are throwing the collected junk on the roadside in an open area, and this is increasingly polluting the street and the nearby surroundings. On questioning one of the staff in charge, I learned that it is due to the absence of large dumping bins or containers and therefore these vehicles are carelessly throwing the waste material on the ground.
As a result, not only there is an increasingly widespread viral disease, but also the sight is disgusting to watch. Consequently, people residing or working nearby are falling prey to the germs and bacteria, thus they have become prone to harmful diseases.
I would like to suggest that the area should be cleared as soon as possible and vast waste disposal vessels must be installed at the spot.
I look forward to a prompting action from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Saxena
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the sanitation and cleanliness problems on our favorite Smith street. Nowadays, the garbage collection vans are throwing the collected junk on the roadside in an open area, and this is
increasingly
polluting the street and the nearby surroundings. On questioning one of the staff in charge, I learned that it is due to the absence of large dumping bins or containers and
therefore
these vehicles are
carelessly
throwing the waste material on the ground.
As a result
, not
only
there is an
increasingly
widespread viral disease,
but
also
the sight is disgusting to
watch
.
Consequently
,
people
residing or working nearby are falling prey to the germs and bacteria,
thus
they have become prone to harmful diseases.
I would like to suggest that the area should
be cleared
as
soon
as possible and vast waste disposal vessels
must
be installed
at the spot.
I look forward to a prompting action from your side.
Yours
faithfully
,
Abhishek
Saxena
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