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You have recently moved to a different location. Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter-explain why you have moved-describe the new house-invite your friend to come and visit v.2

You have recently moved to a different location. Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter-explain why you have moved-describe the new house-invite your friend to come and visit v. 2
Dear John, How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you fit. I am writing this letter to tell you that I have moved to Toronto, a cosmopolitan city in Canada, last week. The reason behind this movement is a new job offer, which I received from Canada' s most popular company, Sunlife Financial. Nevertheless, I always wanted to settle down in this country; and it was my dream to get a job there. My dreams come true. I am really excited to tell you about my new house which I rented for the next two years. It has four bedrooms in total and one drawing room connected with an open modular kitchen. In addition, it has a huge garden, which is full of green plants, in front of the main door. Also, there is a garage beside the garden area. Overall, I would say that it is just like a mansion. Next month, however, its my birthday on ninteenth November and I want to celebrate it with you. So, I would like to invite you to my place on this occasion. During your stay, we will exlore this beautiful city together as I am also new to this amazing city. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Best wishes, Matt Henry
Dear John,

How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you fit. I am writing this letter to
tell
you that I have
moved
to Toronto, a cosmopolitan city in Canada, last week. The reason behind this movement is a new job offer, which I received from
Canada&
#039; s most popular
company
,
Sunlife
Financial.
Nevertheless
, I always wanted to settle down in this country; and it was my dream to
get
a job there. My dreams
come
true.

I am
really
excited to
tell
you about my new
house
which I rented for the
next
two years. It has four bedrooms in total and one drawing room connected with an open modular kitchen.
In addition
, it has a huge garden, which is full of green plants, in front of the main door.
Also
, there is a garage beside the garden area.
Overall
, I would say that it is
just
like a mansion.

Next
month,
however
,
its
my birthday on
ninteenth
November and I want to celebrate it with you.
So
, I would like to invite you to my place on this occasion. During your stay, we will
exlore
this
beautiful
city together as I am
also
new to this amazing city.

I am looking forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible.

Best wishes,

Matt Henry
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
A man who knows two languages is worth two men.
French Proverb

IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different location. Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter-explain why you have moved-describe the new house-invite your friend to come and visit v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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