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You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents Write a letter to them and say Thank them for supporting you Describe how you spend your time Explain about your recovery process v.2

You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents Write a letter to them and say Thank them for supporting you Describe how you spend your time Explain about your recovery process v. 2
Hi colleagues, I became really glad and excited when I received your cards and presents. It means a lot to me to have such a supportive and kind colleagues. I cannot wait to see you again. However, as you know I have to spend the next couple weeks at the bed and give my leg rest as it has been broken badly in a car accident. I’m reading some astonishing articles about the current trend in industry and manufacturing which I couldn’t find enough time when I was working. In the meantime, I spend more time with my family and I can talk more with my nice and beautiful girl. Nevertheless, I’m getting better and I had a visit to my doctor yesterday and he told me that I’ll be able to come back to work soon. See you soon, guys. Kind regards, Sorena.
Hi colleagues,

I became
really
glad and excited when I received your cards and presents. It means a lot to me to have such a supportive and kind colleagues. I cannot wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you again.

However
, as you know I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
spend the
next
couple weeks at the bed and give my leg rest as it has
been broken
badly
in a car accident. I’m reading
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
astonishing articles about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
trend in industry and manufacturing which I couldn’t find
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time when I was working. In the meantime, I spend more time with my family and I can talk more with my nice and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
girl.

Nevertheless
, I’m getting better and I had a visit to my doctor
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
yesterday and
he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that I’ll be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back to work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
, guys.

Kind regards,

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Sorena
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents Write a letter to them and say Thank them for supporting you Describe how you spend your time Explain about your recovery process v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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