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Write a letter to your friend from whom you borrowed something that accidentally broke. Please say– Remind him/her, what have you borrowed– Explain what happened– What you will do about it v.2

Write a letter to your friend from whom you borrowed something that accidentally broke. Please say– Remind him/her, what have you borrowed– Explain what happened– What you will do about it v. 2
Dear Mae, Good day! How are you? Hope you are okay. By the way, this is Maria Judith Parayno, I am currently living at lot 4 Blk 9 Mayon Street, Town and country hills, Brgy. Inarawan Anipolo City. I wrote this letter because I just borrowed a vase from you and I accidentally broke it. If you remember, before we just got moved into our new house, I borrowed a blue large flower vase to you, because we have an event and that is for our new house blessing that was happened two days after I borrowed it to you. Since we have a big family and lots of kid, Suddenly, my niece Julii accidentally hit your vase and brokes into pieces, . I am very sorry for this inconvenience, but you do not have to worry, because I tried my very best to replace it and successfully, I found a replica or your vase. If it is okay to you, I am now going to order that new vase and deliver it personally on your house. Hopind for your kind consideration. Thank you and hope to see you soon. Sincrely yours, Maria Parayno
Dear Mae,

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Good
day! How are you? Hope you are okay. By the way, this is Maria Judith
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Parayno
, I am
currently
living at lot 4
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Blk
9
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Mayon
Street, Town and country hills,
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Brgy
.
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Inarawan
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Anipolo
City. I wrote this letter
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because
I
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just
borrowed a
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vase
from you and I
accidentally
broke it.

If you remember,
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before
we
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just
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got
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moved
into our new
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house
, I borrowed a blue large flower
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vase
to you,
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because
we have an
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event
and
that is
for our new
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house
blessing that
was happened
two days after I borrowed it to you. Since we have a
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big
family and lots of kid,
Suddenly
, my niece
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Julii
accidentally
hit your
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vase
and
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brokes
into pieces
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, .
I am
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very
sorry for this inconvenience,
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but
you do not
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have to
worry,
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because
I tried my
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very
best to replace it and
successfully
, I found a replica or your
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vase
. If it is okay to you, I am
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now
going to order that new
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vase
and deliver it
personally
on your
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house
.

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Hopind
for your kind consideration. Thank you and hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

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Sincrely
yours,

Maria
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Parayno
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend from whom you borrowed something that accidentally broke. Please say– Remind him/her, what have you borrowed– Explain what happened– What you will do about it v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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