You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Expl v.5
You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Expl v. 5
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing about the advertisement that you have made about the one-week walking tour in the Queen hills. I am extremely excited to participate in the trip, however, I am bit anxious about my fitness level.
Adventurous activities always captivate me, on top of that, I am an ardent lover of nature and your programme offers the both and hence, I truly do not want to miss this opportunity.
Having the details of the cost and the schedule in advance will help me to plan things, as I have to tell my superiors about the work offs that I am going to avail and to plan my personal activities too. Please let know the details as early as possible.
Since I am rather chubby, bit concerned whether my obesity will make me unfit for the tour. It would help if you could tell me about the precautions that I must take to take part effectively in the organized event.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Your' s faithfully,
Akilan Palaniappan
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing about the advertisement that you have made about the one-week walking tour in the Queen hills. I am
extremely
excited to participate in the trip,
however
, I am
bit
anxious about my fitness level.
Adventurous activities always captivate me,
on top of that
, I am an ardent lover of nature and your
programme
offers the both and
hence
, I
truly
do not want to miss this opportunity.
Having the
details
of the cost and the schedule in advance will
help
me to plan things, as I
have to
tell
my superiors about the work offs that I am going to avail and to plan my personal activities too.
Please
let
know the
details
as early as possible.
Since I am
rather
chubby,
bit
concerned whether my obesity will
make
me unfit for the tour. It would
help
if you could
tell
me about the precautions that I
must
take to
take part
effectively
in the organized
event
.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Your&
#039; s
faithfully
,
Akilan
Palaniappan
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes