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You recently bought a new piece of equipment for your home but it did not work. You phoned the store but still, no action has been taken. Write a letter to the store manager-describe what equipment you bought-explain the problem with new equipment-say wha v.2

You recently bought a new piece of equipment for your home but it did not work. You phoned the store but still, no action has been taken. Write a letter to the store manager-describe what equipment you bought-explain the problem with new equipment-say wha v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a newly bought microwave oven. Lately, I bought a microwave oven which was manufactured by the Samsung India company. Its model was SMJX4103, and it cost me for $579. After the first 4-5 usage, it stopped completely. I observed that there might be some trouble while pressing its power button. Although I tried to resolve the issue by contacting the customer care centre, I am still unable to press it. When I tried to contact your service engineer, I was told that the complaint would be attended within the two working days. Unfortunately, even after 7 days, no person has come to me to address my genuine complaint. As this product is under warranty, I am entitled to ask for it to be repaired or replaced it with a new one. However, I have decided to take a new product in replacement due to the inconvenience caused by it. Besides, please call me personally whenever you receive this letter. Eagerly waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Dheeraj Goyal
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about a
newly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
microwave oven.

Lately, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a microwave oven which
was manufactured
by the Samsung India
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. Its model was SMJX4103, and it cost me for $579.

After the
first
4-5 usage, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stopped
completely. I observed that there might be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
trouble while pressing its power button. Although I tried to resolve the issue by contacting the customer care
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
, I am
still
unable to press it. When I tried to contact your service engineer, I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
that the complaint would
be attended
within the two working days. Unfortunately, even after 7 days, no person has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to me to address my genuine complaint.

As this product is under warranty, I
am entitled
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
it to
be repaired
or replaced it with a new one.
However
, I have decided to take a new product in replacement due to the inconvenience caused by it.
Besides
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
call me
personally
whenever you receive this letter.

Eagerly
waiting for your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dheeraj
Possible spelling mistake found.
Goyal
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You recently bought a new piece of equipment for your home but it did not work. You phoned the store but still, no action has been taken. Write a letter to the store manager-describe what equipment you bought-explain the problem with new equipment-say wha v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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