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The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. summarise the information below and make comparison where relevant. v.2

The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004.
The given esclacates the rate of population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in high, middle and low income countries during 2000 and 2004. Overall, it is clear that population growth and average birth per woman was highest in low income nations. However, in higher income countries, rate of life expectancy at birth was more over the given period. To begin with, the population growth was highest in case of low income countries which was 2. 0% in 2000 then followed by 1. 8% in next two years. Surprisingly, constant rate of population growth was recorded in middle income countries that was 0. 9%; whereas, in high income countries population grew at about 0. 7% over two years. L Probing further, there was 1. 7 average birth per woman in high income countries, which followed by 2. 1 in middle income countries. It is interesting to note that 3. 9 and 3. 7 average births per woman were in low income countries in 2000 and 2004 respectively. Interestingly, the life expectancy at birth was highest in high income countries which was 78. 0. In low income countries the life expectancy increased from 58. 1 to 58. 8 and 69. 1 to 70. 0 in middle income countries.
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during 2000 and 2004.

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was highest in
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nations.
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, rate of
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which was 2. 0% in 2000 then followed by 1. 8% in
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that was 0. 9%; whereas, in
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grew at about 0. 7% over two years.

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. It is interesting to note that 3. 9 and 3. 7
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in 2000 and 2004
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which was 78. 0. In
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expectancy increased from 58. 1 to 58. 8 and 69. 1 to 70. 0 in
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64Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS letter The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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