Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing to complain about the low quality of your customer service.
One week ago I purchased a novel microwave oven in your store. The equipment was delivered on time and the package had no signs of damage; however, when I tried to use it, the oven won’t work. I immediately phoned the shop.
My phone call was answered by a representative of your firm who initially implied that I did not use the equipment properly and that, perhaps, reading manual may help. After I described in details the problem and my actions, he agreed that the oven is out of order and promised to send a specialist in microwaves who has never shown up.
Now, I demand that this malfunctioning piece of equipment was replaced by a brand new one. The new oven ought to be delivered within a week. If my requirements are not met, I will request a full refund as well as a complaint on you will be written.
I am waiting for your prompt response,
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing to complain about the low quality of your customer service.
One week ago I
purchased
a novel microwave
oven
in your store. The equipment
was delivered
on time and the package had no signs of damage;
however
, when I tried to
use
it, the
oven
won’t work. I immediately phoned the shop.
My phone call
was answered
by a representative of your firm who
initially
implied that I did not
use
the equipment
properly
and that, perhaps, reading manual may
help
. After I
described
in
details
the problem and my actions, he
agreed
that the
oven
is out of order and promised to
send
a specialist in microwaves who
has
never shown up.
Now
, I demand that this malfunctioning piece of equipment
was replaced
by a
brand new
one. The new
oven
ought to
be delivered
within a week. If my requirements are not met, I will request a full refund
as well
as a complaint on you will
be written
.
I am waiting for your prompt response,
Sincerely
yours,
Eugene
Dubinchuk
.
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