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Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. v.2

Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings for the day! My name is Amanpreet Kaur, residence of Patiala, Punjab, and through this letter, I would like to inquire about some electronic equipment. Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Firstly, I recently shifted in this town, so want to buy some electronic things such as mixer, iron, refrigerator, and Phillips tube lights in dozens. Are all of these available at your shop or not? Secondly, if these things are not present at your place, then could you to order the above-said products for me. Not only I want to know about the brand name of the equipment, but also the price of all these along with the tax amount. Still, I would like to know whether your company provides a discount on these things or not? Further, How long time you retain goods for me? I hope you will reply to my letter at earliest, along with a brand description as well as amount which I will have to pay for these electronic equipment Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
Dear Sir or Madam,

Greetings for the day!

My name is
Amanpreet
Kaur
, residence of
Patiala
, Punjab, and through this letter, I would like to inquire about
some
electronic equipment.

Kindly
allow
me to elaborate on this matter.
Firstly
, I recently shifted in this town,
so
want to
buy
some
electronic things such as mixer, iron, refrigerator, and Phillips tube lights in dozens. Are all of these available at your shop or not?
Secondly
, if these things are not present at your place, then could you to order the above-said products for me. Not
only
I want to know about the brand name of the equipment,
but
also
the price of all these along with the tax amount.

Still
, I would like to know whether your
company
provides a discount on these things or not?
Further
, How long time you retain
goods
for me? I hope you will reply to my letter at earliest, along with a brand description
as well
as amount which I will
have to
pay for these electronic
equipment


Yours
faithfully
,

Amanpreet
Kaur
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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